Thoughts/suggestions on my idea :)

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Leo121
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Mon Mar 26, 2018 11:12 am

Characters:
This will be starring my Original character Miss.Rayne: https://imgur.com/1c8gUAr
Miss.Raynes outfit:
Sun Hat: https://tinyurl.com/y9dg79ej
Bikini matching the pattern of the sun hat (Black and white): https://tinyurl.com/ybaekda9
Sean has a body of a swimmer with short brown hair.
Ken is a much more muscular guy with blonde hair.
Both men are around the same height with Miss.Rayne being much taller than both of them.

Backgrounds:
Cul de sac: https://tinyurl.com/y6tvjzsk
Miss.Raynes Backyard: https://tinyurl.com/y8bmra8y
Inside her living room: https://tinyurl.com/ya8fn23q

Summary:
Two ameture baseball players Sean and Ken, get into a disagreement about losing the big game to a rival team. Ken blames Sean for striking out a bunch of times, so ken makes a bet that Sean can’t hit a soft tossed ball even if it’s close. Sean hits the ball and it ends up going into a neighbors backyard. Miss.Rayne was lying down and catching a tan while having a few sips of wine when she fell asleep and the ball lands right in the middle of her massive cleavage. How will Sean get his ball now…?


Story:

Scene 1:

Both Sean and Ken are walking back home from a ameture baseball game. Both Ken and Sean were yelling at each other as to why they just lost their rival game.

Ken: Damnit Sean! We could have won if it wasn’t for your lousy swinging!

Sean: Hey man, I only struck out three times! You struck out at least twice!

Ken: But at least I caught the ball and got two people out, I evened the score!

Sean: Whatever dude! You’re just as bad as me if anything…

*Ken stands in front of Sean with a baseball he was carrying from his back pocket*

Ken: I bet you can’t even hit this ball even if I tossed it like a wimp!
*Sean gets his bat and looks at Ken with a Glare in his eyes*

Sean: Try me!

*MINI GAME*
Ken is tossing the ball slowly and Sean has to line up the crosshair to hit the ball as hard as he can. The ball is going to fall from the top of the screen and should be floating and moving side to side randomly like a feather.

*After Sean hits a Home Run with the ball it goes over the house that is in bewteen both Sean and Kens houses.

Scene 2:

The screen transitions to Miss.Rayne lying down on her cushioned patio chair, with a book in her hand.

Miss.Rayne: Ahhh, I can finally enjoy my alone time and maybe catch up on my reading…

*She puts her big round sunglasses on.*

Miss.Rayne: But first to get some tan on me hehehe…

*She closes her eyes and falls asleep the baseball lands right next to her chair.*

The screen fades back to Sean looking over the fence. The pool is next to the fence and Miss Rayne is Lying down looking toward Sean but can’t see him.

Sean: Oh fuck! Is...its that MISS.RAYNE!? *He has his mouth dropped open with his tongue hanging out.*

*He then puts a serious face on.*

Sean: Ok, ok...Focus Sean...she must be asleep since she hasn’t moved. I’ve just gotta get that ball!

*MINI GAME*

Sean must pass through the pool while avoiding debri, Miss.Raynes annoying poodle, inflatable swans, a pool net, etc. Keeping himself from getting hit too much and ending up getting caught and thrown out of Miss.Raynes backyard.
Scene 3:

Sean finally gets to the ball and when he reaches down Miss.Raynes hand grabs his wrist.

Sean: Finally! Now...Carefulllllyyyyy!

*Miss.Rayne Grabs his wrist*

Sean: M-M-Miss.Rayne! I’m sorry D-Did I wake you?!

*Miss.Rayne takes her glasses off and looks at Sean like this: https://imgur.com/cmKqM7a

Miss.Rayne: Well, well….I knew Ken could get you to show off…

Sean: What do you mean?

Miss.Rayne: Let’s just say I had Ken do me a favor after I help him out…

*On the side of the screen it should show this position of Miss.Rayne just finishing giving Ken a Blow Job like this: https://tinyurl.com/ybz4c2og

Sean: I guess I have to thank him..

Miss.Rayne: Let’s just get down to business….Sean…

Sex Scene 1: Sean is leaning over Miss.Rayne while she is lying down on the long resting chair. First: caress her tits from under the cup to the nipples.
Second: Pull on the nipples with both hands stretching them upwards.
Third: Slapping them together with both hands.

Miss.Rayne reaches up and pulls on his baseball uniform pants and tugs on it three times and out comes Seans meaty and thick cock that knocks her sun hat right off.*

*Miss.Rayne Smiles at Sean*
Miss.Rayne: So this is the kind of wood baseball players use…

Sex Scene 2: Miss.Rayne starts to suck on his cock in this position: https://tinyurl.com/y936rt49

She first starts out licking from the middle of the shaft up
She then sucks on the head of the cock
Then she uses her tits to tit fuck and suck his cock.

All three use slow, medium, and fast speeds.

Sex Scene 3: The screen transitions to Sean standing up and Miss.Rayne is pulling his arm and taking him into her living room. She takes off the bikini and pushes him onto the couch.

She get on top of him in this position: https://tinyurl.com/y8s2njsb

1: But before she lets him fuck her she teases his cock by rubbing her ass against it (Slow)
2:Then she lets only the tip inside and gyrates her hips. (Medium)
3:Then she slams down hard and rides his cock. (Fast)

Sean can also slap her ass during all three phases.

Sex Scene 4: position: https://tinyurl.com/y9cgapa5
Miss.Rayne is squeezing her right nipple and holding her left tit while shes getting fucked. With Sean you can choose what he can grab and she will move her hand away when he grabs her nipple and pinches and pulls it much faster and harder than Miss.Rayne. Or Grab her tit with the palm of his hand. Or if you click in the middle of her cleavage near her collarbone he grabs both tits and massages them. This is all while Sean is fucking her and there are three speeds and finally cumshot on her massive tits.

Finale:

Miss.Rayne: That was amazing! *Gasp!*

*She hears a car pulling into the driveway*

Miss.Rayne: My husband is home! Hurry, you’ve got to get the hell outta here!

Sean: Oh shit!

He runs away and jumps over the fence with a few of his clothes in his hand, when he makes it over the fence a baseball falls on his head.

Sean: Ow! *He looks at the baseball* Huh??

*The baseball has a lipstick kiss on it and a message in script saying:

“See you next season...”

-Rayne

***To be continued…***
Last edited by Leo121 on Mon Mar 26, 2018 3:55 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Jimjim3DX
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Mon Mar 26, 2018 12:06 pm

Hi, we're not submitting custom ideas this time. Please go back and read the message at the top of the submission page:
MNF Metropolis Episode 2

Hello guys, my next game that I would like to make is the second part of XXX-files. I haven't thought about the plot of this part yet. I would like to offer to you to submit 3 (or less) female characters you would like to see in this episode the most and 1 pose for each of the character. They can be the superheroines and the supervillains. Feel free to discuss them on forum.

You're idea won't be made this time, if you want to submit something it needs to be in accordance with the current submission requirements.

See this thread for more details: viewtopic.php?f=2&t=117
Leo121
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Mon Mar 26, 2018 4:33 pm

Ok, thanks for the heads up! :)
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