You would put up whatever the translator gives you and it wouldn't make sense.... the other thread proves just that. Kelumir had to write your idea from the ground up.
This is an Idea I've already wrote the script for but it's my first one so Idk if I wrote it well, would you mind giving it a look to see how good the writing is? viewtopic.php?f=2&t=98
I just look at your idea, she is good and the girls are cool but it's very difficult to understand when all these characters are when we did not play the original games.
Personally I think it's too forceful between scenes (you should find another way that just invokes the girls one after the other).
Otherwise we understand the idea so it's good for submit.
Ah ok thanks for the tips I thought of making one based on the seperate games originally but I couldn't decide which game to do so I ended up just doing a mash up with Heroes Might try do some ones that are based on the original games too so people can understand the characters more