[Game Idea] Gushing Over Magical Girls - The Outsider

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Caliborn
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Fri Aug 29, 2025 7:51 am

Hey, another idea that I came up with. This one is set in the Gushing Over Magical Girls universe, which is a ecchi yuri manga that got pretty popular when it got its anime adaptation recently, and had a second season announced a while back.
Hope you guys enjoy!

Plot:
Somewhere in Japan was a guy named Takeshi. He suffered from loneliness, unable to win over women due to competition from other men. Eventually, he would find an odd gap in reality that would transport him into the Gushing Over Magical Girls universe, which is populated only by women. However, that wasn't the only surprise that was awaiting there...

Characters:
Utena Hiiragi/Magia Baiser: https://files.catbox.moe/avzu7v.png
Haruka Hanabishi/Magia Magenta: https://files.catbox.moe/0qc7h8.png
Sayo Minakami/Magia Azul: https://files.catbox.moe/x3mup4.png
Kaoruko Tenkawa/Magia Sulfur: https://files.catbox.moe/mkc8a1.png

Bodies:
https://files.catbox.moe/1625aq.jpg
https://files.catbox.moe/7u9gjy.png

Takeshi (OC, random guy): https://files.catbox.moe/n3687s.png

Utena's flower monster: https://files.catbox.moe/4xfxan.png

Story:

*Starts by showing Takeshi walking on the sidewalk in some city*

Narrator: Takeshi is a very average man, living a very average life in a very average city in Japan.
He has a stable job and a place where to live. However, he has nobody waiting for him home.
Indeed, he is very lonely. He has never been able to score a woman due to competition from other, more interesting men.
That day, he was getting back home from his job, expecting the way back to be just like usual.
Takeshi: Hmm, maybe I should drop by the grocery store. I'm starting to run low on some stuff.
Actually, do I have that planned on my calendar app? Maybe I should move it to now...

*Scene shows a shot of his phone screen while he's holding it*

Takeshi: ...daw, come on, no internet? How comes? I'm right in the middle of the city!

*Scene then shifts to some dark hallway Takeshi walks into*

Takeshi: Is it gonna be better here?
It's really weird. Maybe something is interfering?

*Scene shows a trash can with a strange blue light behind it*

Takeshi: ...Huh?
What's happening there?
Really weird. Let me just...

*Takeshi pushes the trash can asides, revealing a strange, sky blue, glowing crack on the wall* Umph!

Takeshi: Pfew! Now that's done... Huh?
What... is this?
It doesn't look natural at all, something's off.
I wonder what will happen if I...

*He touches it, and the screen flashes white. He then gets pushed back, with the crack no longer being there.*

Takeshi: Wah!
W-what happened?!
Is it... gone?
...Was I just hallucinating?
...Yeah, I'm getting tired. Let's just go home.

*He goes back to the main street he was on. However, the street is different from how it was before.*

Takeshi: What...
Where...
WHERE IN THE WORLD AM I?!

*He pulls out his phone again*

Takeshi: ...And of course, I still don't have any internet, COME ON! I'm completely lost here!

*He tries to talk to a random girl on the street*

Takeshi: ...Erm, excuse me, miss! Could you tell me...
Passerby: AAAAAHH!

*The girl runs away*

Takeshi: ...Okay, I was never a popular guy, but this is new.
Sigh... whatever. I probably just took a wrong turn, I'll just look around to find my way...
Man... there is something... off here.
I can't put my finger on it, but...
It's like... *something* is missing.
Passerby: ENORMEETA!!
Takeshi: What.
Passerby: ENORMEETA IS ATTACKING!!

*Upon hearing those words, chaos ensues on the street, and everyone runs away. Takeshi tries to avoid getting caught in the crowd and to stay in place.*

Takeshi: H-hey! What in the...
WON'T ANYONE TELL ME WHAT IS GOING ON?!

*But eventually, everyone is gone and only him is left.*

Takeshi: Alright. Finally a bit of...
Flower Monster: FLOWEEEEERRR!!

*Scene shows the flower monster entering the street, holding Haruka, Sayo and Kaoruko in its vines. Their clothes are torn and damaged by the monster's acid spray*

Takeshi: ...Nevermind.

*The flower monster wraps him and sprays acid on his clothes, melting them, only leaving his underwear*

Takeshi: Waaaah! Hey, stop that!

*Utena enters the scene*

Utena: Huh.
Who is that?
Kaoruko: Oi, Baiser!
Can't you see that's just a civilain?!
Release her! She's got nothing to do with this!
Takeshi: ..."Her"?
Utena: Err... Haha! Right. This mere human is of no use to me.
Flower, please let her go...
Huh?
Hold on a minute.

*Scene shows Utena taking a closer look at Takeshi*

Utena: Why are you... like this?
Takeshi: L-like what?!
Utena: Like... this.
The strong jaw line. The odd body form.
Your tits have that weird, rectangular shape. What's up with that?
And why... does it make me feel... weird?
Takeshi: My... tits?
I don't have tits! I'm a man! Those are my pecs.
Utena: ...Huh?
What is... a "man"?
Takeshi: What...
That...
You don't know what a man is?
Utena: No.
Takeshi: Oh my god, that's it...
That's what I felt was missing...
Back then, on the streets, there were only women...
Not a single man!
I got transported into a world with no man!
Kaoruko: Hey!
I'm not sure what's going on here but...
Clearly that thing isn't normal!
It should be studied! So stop messing with it with your monsters! You'll damage it!
Takeshi: ..."It". That somehow feels even worse...
Utena: Right, right.
Although, I wonder...
I want to see...
What you have... down there.

*Utena pulls his pants to reveal his cock*

Takeshi: H-hey! Don't look!
That's like, super private!
It's the equivalent of a pussy for women!
Kaoruko: If you think telling her that is gonna stop her...
Utena: W-woah...
It's... weird... but also...
I... want it...
For some reason... I... want... to toy with it.
Hehe
Hehehehe
Let's see...
How your thing reacts...
To being teased.

Sex scene 1: Handjob (and then blowjob)
https://files.catbox.moe/c8bgnb.png
Still bound by the flower monster's vines, Takeshi is sitting with his cock pointing up, and Utena looking at it with a lustful expression.
5 options: Jerk off (which is just handjob), lick (which is handjob + licking), and easy, medium and hard blowjobs.
Finishes by cumming inside Utena's mouth.

Utena: Hmmm... !
Oooh... What is this...
I've never tasted something like this before!
Hehehehehe... I like it... your taste.
Takeshi: Um, err... thanks?
Utena: I want to milk you more...
Say, do you think this could go... down there too?
Takeshi: Well, yeah, that's uh. Kind of what it's supposed to do, actually.
Utena: Really?
Then, let's try it...

Sex scene 2: Squatting Cowgirl
https://files.catbox.moe/dolehu.jpg
Takeshi is in a similar position to the previous scene while Utena rides him, with a hand on her own leg and the other on Takeshi's shoulder.
Finishes with a creampie inside Utena's pussy.

Utena: Aaaah, oooh... !
This feels so much better than using a toy!
I want to do it again...
Takeshi: Ah... I... I can't!
Utena: Huh?
Takeshi: I just came twice! I can't keep going like this!
Men can't just cum repeatedly like this endlessly! And I'm inexperienced!
Utena: Oh.
So the number of times you can climax like this is limited, huh.
Hmmm. Actually, your thing seems to be getting smaller now.
Takeshi: Yes, that's... also normal.
It means I can't climax right now.
Utena: Well, that's annoying...
But what if...
Let's try this!

*Utena strikes Takeshi's dick with her weapon, Frusta Dominazione. This causes it to grow big again, however, it also causes a reaction on Takeshi.*

Takeshi: Huh? Wha-
W-WHAAAAAAAAA!!

*Takeshi suddenly grows much bigger and more muscular. His face turns more masculine too and his pupils disappear. He effortlessly breaks out of the flower monster's vines.*

Takeshi: RAAAAAAAAAAHH!!
Utena: Huh. I wasn't expecting that.

*Feeling pain from its vines being destroyed, the flower monster rushes towards Takeshi, trying to attack him*

Flower Monster: FLOWEEEEEEERRR!!

*But Takeshi screams back at it*

Takeshi: RRRRRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHH!!!
Flower Monster: Floweeeerrr...
Utena: Huh?
Did it... tame the monster?
Takeshi: SEIZE. HER.
Utena: What?

*Before she can react, the flower monster grabs Utena by the wrists and waist, lifting her with her hands up*

Utena: H-hey! Let me go!
Why aren't you obeying me?!
Hey, you!
Look, I'm sorry I did that to your... thing...
So please, stop this okay?
Takeshi: RAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHH!!
Utena: Oh god... this is bad...

Sex scene 3: Titfuck
https://files.catbox.moe/99h0eh.jpg
With the monster still holding Utena's wrists up, Takeshi uses her breasts. Utena looks more surprised than anything else though, she kind of enjoys it.
Cums all over Utena's face.

Utena: Ah... it's all over me...
That's... huh...
Actually... pretty amazing.
Kaoruko: Pfahaha! Look at that!
The pervert got a taste of her own medicine!
Haruka: Hey, civilain!
Great job! I think you beat her!
Now could you, huh...
Tell the monster to let us go, please?
Takeshi: ...
BRING. THEM. TOGETHER.

*The flower lines up all three magical girls as well as the villainess, all being lifted with their ass up*

Haruka: ...Eh?
Sayo: You girls...
I don't think you should have made it notice us while it was in this state!
Utena: E-er... hey there, magical girls...
So as you can see, the situation kind of went out of hand...
Kaoruko: You're fucking dead when I break out of this, Baiser.
Utena: ...Okay.
Takeshi: RAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHH!!!
Sayo: Look...
I think we have bigger concerns right now!

Sex scene 4: Doggystyle with all 4 girls
https://files.catbox.moe/oq2m8s.jpg (all 4 are lined up like that)
All 4 girls are lined up with their ass up, looking back at the camera, the vine still binding them. The player can choose to penetrate any of them. All girls get vaginal penetration except Utena who gets anal instead. The player must cum inside all 4 girls to complete the scene.
Haruka reacts with surprise to the sex, as if she doesn't understand what's going on, she's too pure
Sayo attempts to resist but it quickly becomes clear she's enjoying it (she makes something like an ahegao face for hard sex)
Kaoruko is visibly pissed and glares at the camera
Utena is surprised (and tired from the previous scenes), however she ends up enjoying it

*After the sex scene, shows Takeshi back to normal, lying unconscious on the ground*

Takeshi: Uuuugh...

*Then switches back to the girls*

Haruka: Haa... haa...
What... ah...
Utena: Ooooh...
I've never... felt like this... before...
Sayo: I... I...
What... is this...

*Suddenly, a yellow flash, and the scene changes to Kaoruko wearing her big flaming fists ( https://files.catbox.moe/hoo3ys.jpg ), she managed to break out of the monster's grip*

Kaoruko: Alright, let's end this.
Haruka: Sulfur... !

*The flower monster attacks her, but she destroys it easily*

Flower Monster: FLOWEEERRR!!
Kaoruko: DIE!

*All girls get released*

Sayo: Sulfur! You did it!
Utena: Y-yeah!
You... you saved us... haha...
Kaoruko: Nah. Go to hell.

*Kaoruko lands a barrage of hits on Utena, sending her flying into the sky*

Utena: WAAAAAAAAAH!!!

*Scene then shows Haruka and Sayo lifting an unconscious Takeshi*

Sayo: Guess we could take it to one of our houses to care for it?
Haruka: Right! Let's put it into safety.
Then we'll figure out what exactly is up with it.

END
6god342
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Sat Aug 30, 2025 4:44 pm

nah brother it a yuri manga for a reason. no need to add a man into it
6god342
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Sat Aug 30, 2025 4:52 pm

plus they're minors as well so lwk that fucking weird
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Caliborn
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Sat Aug 30, 2025 5:41 pm

6god342 wrote:
> nah brother it a yuri manga for a reason. no need to add a man into it

This is a parody idea for a reason as well? Weird post

6god342 wrote:
> plus they're minors as well so lwk that fucking weird

As long as they look mature that's never been a problem on this site I think (see the Fairy Tail game for example). With how they look you can easily just ignore that, no?
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adzrobinz
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Sat Aug 30, 2025 9:30 pm

Wow. Checked the wiki and characters in Fairy Tail are 17 and under. Game blacklisted. Parody or not kids are sacred and underage stuff just feels wrong on so many levels but that just me personally. I like my characters to be 20+ at least.

No offence but I wont be giving this game my endorsement because of the Yuri. Everything else on the script is great. The construction and the writing for example. I can tell you put a lot of effort into it. Keep on trucking.
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Caliborn
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Sat Aug 30, 2025 10:55 pm

adzrobinz wrote:
> Wow. Checked the wiki and characters in Fairy Tail are 17 and under. Game
> blacklisted. Parody or not kids are sacred and underage stuff just feels
> wrong on so many levels but that just me personally. I like my characters
> to be 20+ at least.
>
> No offence but I wont be giving this game my endorsement because of the
> Yuri. Everything else on the script is great. The construction and the
> writing for example. I can tell you put a lot of effort into it. Keep on
> trucking.

Well to be fair, in the context of games like this, you can always just see the characters as aged up. It's not like they actually look like children, obviously that would be another can of worms entirely and probably require them to be redesigned. Or should it be stated explicitly in the games that all characters are aged up or over 18? Honestly, that feels unnecessary to me because the only way anyone would ever suspect otherwise would be by being familiar with the original work, which obviously a parody is not. They are two different universes.

As for your feedback, thanks! I actually got kind of worried the beginning might be too long (for both this and my Touhou idea I also submitted). I'm not sure how much text people are willing to skip through to replay a game they already know before it becomes an annoyance. For me personally it's never really been an issue in a game especially with the replay sex scenes option at the end.
And for what you said about yuri, can you clarify what you meant by that? Because this script doesn't have any yuri in it. Only the source material does. I don't think yuri scenes are popular on this website and I don't have any in my ideas.
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mawilefan
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Sun Aug 31, 2025 12:54 am

Nah this parody is great, I'd love to see it happen. I know plenty of folks who see Yuri mangas as the perfect self-insert harems so this would definitely appeal to me in that sense lol

I don't see much issue with it
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Sun Aug 31, 2025 1:05 am

6god342 wrote:
> nah brother it a yuri manga for a reason. no need to add a man into it
most mnf games with copyrighted characters don't feature those characters. It would just be offbrand copies with different names to avoid getting sued. I see your point though, Mnf games hasn't done a proper yuri game in a while so using a man feels like missing an opportunity.
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Sun Aug 31, 2025 1:52 am

karlzo wrote:
> 6god342 wrote:
> > nah brother it a yuri manga for a reason. no need to add a man into it
> most mnf games with copyrighted characters don't feature those characters. It would
> just be offbrand copies with different names to avoid getting sued. I see your point
> though, Mnf games hasn't done a proper yuri game in a while so using a man feels like
> missing an opportunity.

I mean feel free to submit your own idea, it's not like they're mutually exclusive or anything. Anyone can make threads
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