Robin's Fishman Encounter

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Jimjim3DX
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Thu Jan 25, 2018 6:37 am

Hey guys, long time stalker, first time submitting an idea. Been working on it off and on for a while now while doing other things and finally got around to finishing it.

Since it's my first submission I'd appreciate feedback to let me know if I've left out important details that are needed or If my ideas are too confusing/long etc.

I've always liked seeing One Piece parody games here but also felt like there were far more with Nami as the main character when I think quite a lot of fans like Robin just as much. Plus there's usually heaps of very convenient moments in the one piece story for plausible "in-cannon" sex scenes to be inserted and I always appreciated that. Not sure how many people here like the One Piece characters or these types of "parody" games over the OC based games though. Let me know your thoughts?

Also what are the rules with regards to resubmitting ideas in the future if they get turned down? Can we keep trying our luck to get an idea submitted or is it expected that we come up with a new idea or iteration for the next submission?
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Thu Jan 25, 2018 6:50 am

I haven't read your idea yet, but I will soon and I'll let you know what I think.

What I can tell you now though is that there are no restrictions on re-submitting an idea. If it doesn't win you can submit it again and again as many times as you want till it wins (or you give up on it :lol: ). And if it doesn't win, you can always try making a few adjustments here and there and that might help get a few more votes.
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Thu Jan 25, 2018 7:14 am

Thanks, that's good to know.

Also with the bestiality restrictions it's fine as long as it's not an IRL animal right? I know it says Furries are ok. Does that mean humanoid monsters, mythical creatures and aliens are all fine too? I had another anime parody idea I wouldn't mind pitching in the future based on the Fairy Tail girls Erza and Mirajane and their capture at the hands of the demons during the Tartaros Arc. But I'd like to get a feel for how many people here are into the anime parodies before writing more submissions. I don't want to get in the way of people trying to get more of their or MnF's OC based games.
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Thu Jan 25, 2018 11:31 am

Jimjim3DX wrote:
Thu Jan 25, 2018 7:14 am
Thanks, that's good to know.

Also with the bestiality restrictions it's fine as long as it's not an IRL animal right? I know it says Furries are ok. Does that mean humanoid monsters, mythical creatures and aliens are all fine too? I had another anime parody idea I wouldn't mind pitching in the future based on the Fairy Tail girls Erza and Mirajane and their capture at the hands of the demons during the Tartaros Arc. But I'd like to get a feel for how many people here are into the anime parodies before writing more submissions. I don't want to get in the way of people trying to get more of their or MnF's OC based games.
Well those rules are only there thanks to CCBill’s limitations. The way I view what male characters can be like now is, as long as it could just be a guy in a costume and/or a lot of make-up, you’re ok. So I think you should be ok with these Fishmen, but don’t hold me to that.

Now, I’ve read through it and it looks alright, certainly a lot better than my first attempt.

With that said, I do feel you were being a little ambitious in certain areas, such as the part where they tear her skirt and jacket off piece by piece. I feel it would be more reasonable to go for tearing them off in a single action. Though I think you did the right thing by only putting in 3 sex scenes since you asked for all the groping at the beginning.

After going through it, I’ve done a bit of typo fixing and I made a few other minor adjustments. For example, I changed the description of the warm up part from “molesting” to “groping” and “playing with”, because saying that the Fishmen molest her sounds a bit too rapey.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/10MW ... sp=sharing
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Thu Jan 25, 2018 1:24 pm

Kelumir wrote:
Thu Jan 25, 2018 11:31 am

Now, I’ve read through it and it looks alright, certainly a lot better than my first attempt.

With that said, I do feel you were being a little ambitious in certain areas, such as the part where they tear her skirt and jacket off piece by piece. I feel it would be more reasonable to go for tearing them off in a single action. Though I think you did the right thing by only putting in 3 sex scenes since you asked for all the groping at the beginning.

After going through it, I’ve done a bit of typo fixing and I made a few other minor adjustments. For example, I changed the description of the warm up part from “molesting” to “groping” and “playing with”, because saying that the Fishmen molest her sounds a bit too rapey.
Thanks for the feedback and for fixing some things with the script. I've changed my submission a bit to reflect some of these edits.

I had the Fishman Leader specifically refer to his men as "guys" to differentiate it from Robin's use of the word "boys" which she's using in a seductive, teasing kind of way.

I replaced all the "molesting" references with the examples you gave. I personally don't see how "groping" is any less rapey than "molesting" but it doesn't make much difference to me so it's an easy change. Either way, I think I've been clear enough in stating that Robin is consenting & enjoying herself throughout the entire story. How recently did the CCbill rules with regards to depictions of rape come in to effect? I could have sworn that many of the recent games here have involved somewhat unwilling female participants in some capacity. Is there more information on what does or doesn't constitute an act of rape by CCBill's standards? Since I'm sure some would argue for example that things like forced concent through blackmail or mind control could be rape. Not that it matters much for this idea but would be helpful to know for future ideas.

Also I fully realize that a bit of extra work would have to go into the extended stripping sections for her skirt and jacket but considering I'm suggesting things they've done before in previous games I don't think I'm being all that overly ambitious. Personally I wouldn't mind trading the third sex scene for a more interactive stripping sequence but I'm sure others don't feel the same. In the end I left in the descriptions of how I would wish for the scene to play out but suggested your simpler approach if it wasn't possible. In the end its up to Vadim and I'm fine with how he chooses to handle it.

Not that their needs to be a proper mini-game segment, but if I had to add one I'd make the part where the Fishmen sneak up to handcuff Robin into a stealth type mini-game. You'd play as the Fishman Leader POV and you'd have to sneak up behind her and equip the cuffs but she'll turn around every now and then and you'll have to hide behind a rock or something or you'll get spotted and caught by her powers. But I chose to leave that part out and kept the scene and pose changes to a minimum in the hopes that more effort could reasonably be placed on the animations and coding for the groping/stripping segment.

Anyway, thanks for the feedback, I really appreciate it.
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Tue Feb 06, 2018 5:34 pm

Since it's been revealed by Vadim that games cannot feature sex between human characters & non-human characters I've decided to rework my Idea to remove the fishmen and replace them with humans instead. However, I added an additional element of the Pirate Captain having the ability to enhance and grow body parts so there's now an growth/expansion scene. I also wrote up a minigame idea but it can be cut if the game idea is too long.

I'll submit this if we're going to be doing a re-vote.

“Robin” vs “The Big Cock Pirates” (One Piece Parody)
SYNOPSIS:
Robin, the famous archeologist slut of the “Strawhat” pirate crew is studying some ancient glyphs on Fishman Island when she is snuck up on and captured by an up-and-coming pirate crew: “The Big Cock Pirates”. Their Captain ate a devil fruit giving him the ability to permanently enhance certain body parts of those he touches. He uses his powers to grow & enhance Robin’s already impressive “assets”, before stripping and gangbanging her with his crew of extremely well endowed men (all thanks to his special enhancement powers).

SEX SCENES SUMMARY:

1: Titjob to blowjob with the Captain. Like this pose (no rope): https://static1.hentai-game-xxx.com/upl ... 700/18.png

2: 4v1 Gangbang. This pose except double anal: http://onepiecehentai.org/toon_pics/picture_2170.jpg

3: 4v1 Gangbang. This pose on the right except she’s also giving a blowjob to a 4th cock: https://i7a8a9b6.ssl.hwcdn.net/toons-em ... 924501.jpg

CHARACTERS:
Robin: http://onepiece-treasurecruise.com/en/w ... /c1408.png

But her body will grow into something like this during the story: (eyes are still light blue though like in the original image): https://e-hentai.org/s/0849c5d176/1169446-40

While I like what Kosmos did with Robin in the “One Piece of Luck” games I’d really like to see her unique eyes and nose drawn closer to the source material if it’s possible. And her two small bangs for her hair with the rest pulled back. Either none or minimal pubic hair. Her normal facial expression is that type of seductive smile with the narrow eyes like in the second image or the one below in the next paragraph. And she has a seductive laugh which is typically written as “Ufufu.”

She’s wearing the same outfit as the above two images, better view here (except her eye color should be blue & her heels rose colored): https://e-hentai.org/s/bb292fc227/1169446-133

Her right leg should always be exposed beneath where the skirt is tied up. You can make the skirt shorter if you want. Don’t worry about the drawing the flower patterns on her jacket or skirt.

She has a tiny thong on underneath that looks like this (again don’t worry about the flower pattern):
https://1.bp.blogspot.com/-sEP1qUiS2IQ/ ... 96c7f3.jpg

“Big Cock Pirates” Captain:
A large, muscular black man with a huge cock.
Something like the man in this image for face/body and outfit (without chain & weapon): https://e-hentai.org/s/57f2ef1fe1/1153907-24

Huge cock something around this size if possible: https://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures ... it-Tribute

“Big Cock Pirates” Crew:
3 Generic looking male pirates like in this image but they are also really large and muscular with huge cocks: https://e-hentai.org/s/479e21707a/448503-1

The image is just to give an example. They don’t have to look like that. You probably only need to draw the Captain’s face and can keep the others out of view or silhouetted if you do a group shot. Their real purpose for existing is just to provide giant cocks to fuck Robin with.

LOCATION:
In front of Fishman Island’s Poneglyph: https://imgur.com/Y6G8F08
A big stone with ancient glyphs carved into it, surrounded by coral, seaweed etc. It’s an island deep underwater but inside of a big air bubble. If you need to change it for parody reasons you could make it a penis shaped stone carving instead. And change the name to ‘Penileglyph’ if you want to avoid using the proper name.

STORY:
Narration: “The famous Strawhat pirate crew have stopped by Fishman Island while on their way to the “New World”. Robin, the ship’s archaeologist has ventured off by herself to the site of the Island’s Poneglyph in order to study it.”

Robin is up next to the Poneglyph reading the ancient glyphs while holding her arms behind her back.

Robin: “Fascinating, it appears that some kind of ancient apology letter has been carved onto here. I’ll have to make sure to update my notes later.”

Narration: “However, Robin is blissfully unaware of the dangerous up-and-coming pirate crew that was slowly sneaking up behind her!”

OPTIONAL MINIGAME (CUT THIS GAME IF IDEA IS ALREADY TOO LONG & SKIP TO “VICTORY SCENE”):

Play as the Captain from a POV perspective as you sneak up behind Robin and attempt to handcuff her with the sea prism stone cuffs which you are holding in your hands. https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/one ... 0330042756.

It’s a game where the camera (our POV) is slowly approaching towards Robin whose back is turned to you as she’s holding her hands behind her back. Every now and then she’ll turn her head and look over her shoulder and you have to duck behind some coral that’s on the left or right side of the screen before she spots you and she gets you with her powers (see end scene for a picture of Robin’s power pose that you could play if the player is spotted and loses the mini game).

Game instruction text: “Sneak up behind the pirate slut Robin and cuff her hands with the special sea stone cuffs that will prevent her from using her powers. Be careful though, Robin might decide to look behind her so you’d better hide behind the coral before she spots you & knocks you out.”

LOSING SCENE:
If Robin catches you she will be standing in this pose as she uses her powers to choke out the player with summoned arms (don’t need to draw arms though since it’s a POV camera still):
https://3.bp.blogspot.com/-QIkeSpkf7VY/ ... Bpic09.jpg

Just for reference: When Robin uses her devil fruit powers that kind of petal effect happens, (example: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3Qyk9RYLmMY) It’d be cool is there are a few petals blowing across the screen as activates her powers but you can cut this if it’s already too long.

Robin: “Cien Fleur!”

Robin (smiling): “Ufufu, you though you could sneak up on me? How amusing. Better luck next time boys.”

“Try again” button to restart the minigame.

VICTORY SCENE (IF YOU CUT THE MINIGAME SKIP TO THIS PART):
When right behind her you click on her hands on equip the seas stone cuffs.

Robin (mild surprise): “Huh?!”

Robin turns around and the pre-sex dialogue scene begins.

Captain: “Hehe, we got her! We’ve captured the famous Robin of the Strawhat crew.”

Robin (curious): “A group of big, strong men? Are you here for my bounty? Oh, these feel like sea stone cuffs…”

Captain: “That’s right Bitch! With those cuffs on you’ll be severely weakened, and you won’t be able to use your devil fruit powers either. And we’re not here for your bounty, just for you.”

Robin (her usual smile): “I see… Well boys, congratulations, you’ve successfully captured me. Now, how do you intend on proceeding?”

Captain: “Heh! Of course we’re going to have a little fun with you, but first how about a demonstration of MY devil fruit powers!”

The Captain grabs one of Robin’s breasts with his big hand and squeezes. He uses his enhancing powers to grow her body into one that’s much curvier like the usual MnF girls. So her body should transform into a curvy version similar to here (eyes are still light blue though like in the original image): https://e-hentai.org/s/0849c5d176/1169446-40

Give her some extra huge breasts and ass. But her clothes are still on, just stretched a bit with her new huge “assets”.

Robin (a little surprised): “Oh my! That’s quite an impressive ability…”

Captain: Of course, have you never heard of the up-and-coming “Bick Cock Pirates” and their incredible Captain?

Robin: “Ah yes, the “Big Cock Pirates”. A relatively new crew rumored to possess, well… incredibly large cocks.”

Captain: “That’s right, and it’s all thanks to my devil fruit power. I ate the “Enhance-Enhance” fruit which lets me permanently grow and enhance specific body parts of those I touch. That’s how all my men & I got so jacked, in more ways than one…”

Robin (her usual smile) “Mmmm, Intriguing… Well boys, aren’t you going to show me what you’ve got down their?”

Captain: “All in good time slut. But since you’re so eager, I think I’d like to play around with that new body of yours first.”

Robin: “Ufufu, of course. Bring it on then.”

PLAY WITH ROBIN’S BODY:
The aim of the game is simply to fill up the pleasure gauge by playing with her body. As you progress you’ll be able to strip her and keep going. It’s a lot like some of Kosmos’ older games like “Bloodrayne” and “Lara Kink” which had some nice interactive stripping segments.

Robin is in a similar pose as Wondergirl in the “Wondergirl vs Robbers” game except she has her hands in the cuffs instead of being held by the robber.

Captain: “You think this is some kind of fun game slut? That’s cute, but you might not feel so confident when you realize who you’re really playing with.”

Robin (still smiling): “Oh really?”

Captain: “That’s right you little cock tease. Soon that wanted ass of yours will be begging for our big, enhanced cocks.”

Robin: “Ufufu. Calm down boys, first let’s just see how good you are with your hands.”

Like in a lot of Vadim’s previous games that had touching segments, there’s no specific order that the body parts need to be groped in. You can touch Robin’s body parts in any order. You just need to fill the gauge before the stripping phase begins.

To fill the first pleasure gauge you need to molest her arms, shoulders, belly, outer thighs, hips, both her breasts and her mouth.

Robin: “Mmmm, I’m really starting to heat up here. You know, if you can undo these cuffs for me I’ll be able to strip out of these troublesome, tight clothes for you.”

Captain: “Oh no you don’t! Stupid whore. Did you honestly think that we’re dumb enough to let you have your powers back so easily? We’ll take our sweet time and strip all your clothing ourselves.”

Robin: “Oh, now isn’t that an exciting thought…”

Robin: “How about you start with my glasses?”

Click to take the glasses off her forehead.

Robin: “hmm, perhaps you could unzip this tight jacket next?”

Move the mouse downwards to unzip the rest of her jacket (more breast exposed, can see areola but nipples still barely covered).

Robin: “Ah, it feels rather nice to let to these new breasts of mine hang free. Before you go any further, would you be so kind as to undo my skirt?”

Captain: “You know what slut? You’re way too into this. Instead, I’m gonna tear off that skirt so you can’t ever wear it again!”

Robin: “Oh?”

Then you get to tear her skirt off. If possible I’d like it if you could rip bits of her skirt off piece by piece like in the “Tentacle Flogging” game except you have to click rapidly to fill up a tugging gauge before you can tear off each piece. Otherwise just click rapidly to tear the skirt off in one go.

Once the skirt’s been destroyed her tiny black thong will be exposed.

Robin: “Ufufu. That was quite the impressive display of strength.”

Captain: “Bitch, don’t you ever shut up? Time to finish off this Jacket.”

You then tear off her unzipped jacket by clicking rapidly (either in multiple pieces if it’s possible or all at once), exposing her nipples.

Robin: “Mmmm, such aggression…”

Captain: “Oh you’ve seen nothing yet slut!”

Here’s the second pleasure gauge: grope her inner thighs, pussy over her thong, pussy inside her thong, both breasts and both nipples.

Captain: “How’s that Robin? You’re soaking wet. Got anything clever to say now?

Robin: “Mmmm, I suppose you boys are pretty good after all. But am I ever going to get to see these rumored “big cocks” of yours or are we just about done here?”

Captain: “Done here?! Oh we’re far from done here pirate slut! But first, let’s get rid of this tiny little thing…”

Robin: “Ufufu, as you wish.”

You finally get to tear off her tiny black thong. The animation for tearing it apart is the same as how you strip Lara’s panties in “Lara Kink” except this time you have to be rapidly clicking on them to progress the tearing animation. She’s now naked except for her heels which she can keep on.

Robin: “Mmmm. Well done, I’m all exposed. What’s next on the schedule?”

Captain: “You’re about to find out!”

There’s a final short pleasure gauge to fill where you slap her tits, rub her clit and finger her pussy until she orgasms.

Robin: “Ahhh! You got me. Now I can’t wait any longer. Introduce me to those huge things you’ve been hiding down there. ”

A short transition scene where she gets to see their big cocks revealed, close to her face. They’re positioned like something in these images: https://pbs.twimg.com/profile_images/81 ... 4P9aHf.jpg
Or http://pictures.hentai-foundry.com/c/cy ... _Asagi.jpg

She’s on her knees now, her hands are still cuffed behind her back and she’s enjoying it. Their cocks are extra-large so at least as big as that first image.

Captain: “Hehe, what do think about these, whore?”

Robin: “Amazing! I’d known you were well endowed, but this is quite unexpected.”

Captain: “Well you asked for it, and now it’s your turn to pleasure us!”

Robin: “Of course, let’s not waste any more time. I suppose you’re up first Captain?”

SEX SCENE 1:
Titjob to blowjob with the Captain. Like this pose (no rope): https://static1.hentai-game-xxx.com/upl ... 700/18.png

Same as before, she’s on her knees, hands still cuffed behind her back but enjoying the scene. It starts as a normal titjob but turns into the tit & blowjob when the pleasure gauge is halfway full.

Robin (at halfway): “I… I still can’t believe how big it is…”

Captain: “Shut your mouth bitch. Better yet, I’ll shut it for you, hehehe!”

Fill the second half of the pleasure gauge and cum inside her mouth. When the Captain pulls his cock out of her mouth, this time she has an ahego type face similar to the one on the right here: https://pictures.hentai-foundry.com/t/T ... ishmen.jpg

Robin: “Mmmm, so delicious! I have to have more!”

Captain: “Look at her guys, she’s already completely in love with my cock. You three better get in here and help me finish taming her.”

SEX SCENE 2:
This pose: http://onepiecehentai.org/toon_pics/picture_2170.jpg

Except there are 4 cocks and her hands are still cuffed behind her back. One in her mouth, 2 in her ass and one in her pussy. You can hide the bodies of the two who are in her ass and just have their floating cocks.

Fill the gauge and cum inside. They pull their cocks out when they’re done so she can speak.

Robin (Ahego face): “So… Much… Cock…”

Captain: “Alright guys, it looks like we’ve finally managed to break her, it should be safe to get these cuffs off and have some real fun.”

Click on the cuffs to remove them start the next scene.

SEX SCENE 3(CUT THIS ONE IF THE GAME IS TOO LONG):
This pose on the right: https://i7a8a9b6.ssl.hwcdn.net/toons-em ... 924501.jpg
Her hands are uncuffed now just like in this picture but there is the extra Fishman who she’s blowing.

Fill the gauge and cum inside.

Captain: “Ahhh, that was great. So Robin, how do you like your new master’s cocks?”

END SCENE:

Transition to the end scene with a flower petal transition screen kind of like this but if more of the screen is covered (CUT IF TOO COMPLEX): https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=weDs3udzshA

Robin is standing in the pose she uses with her powers & the flower petal effect again from the MINIGAME LOSING SCENE except she’s naked this time and her body is enhanced & curvy. Robin uses her devil fruit powers to summon arms to choke the pirates into unconsciousness but it’s the Captain’s POV again so you don’t have to draw her summoned arms or the choking.

Robin: “Cien Fleur!”

Captain: “Damn it! I thought we had her under control!”

Robin: “Nice try boys, your big cocks were quite impressive, but I’ve suffered through far rougher treatment in the past compared to what you softies dished out. Remember, beyond this island lies the “New World”. The sluts there are going to be able to take a lot more punishment than that. If your goal was to truly tame me then you’ll have to get a lot stronger and try a lot harder… (she winks at them) next time.”

Screen starts to fade to black, with a closing POV eye effect like this: http://static.tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pub/i ... m_9637.png

Captain (Losing Consciousness) “Damn… you... Robin...”

Robin: (she’s smiling as they lose consciousness) “Ufufu. Sweet dreams boys.”

GAME ENDS.

Feel free to make tweaks where necessary if anything I’ve written in the dialogue needs to be changed to make it more ”Parody" style.
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