MNF Metropolis Episode 2 - Planning Thread

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Sat Mar 24, 2018 10:28 pm

Jimjim3DX wrote:
Sat Mar 24, 2018 5:23 pm
mnf_vadim wrote:
Sat Mar 24, 2018 1:04 pm
Please, submit up to NEW 3 characters in one "idea". Feel free to describe them in details and tell the background. I don't mind if you post the idea that will connect these characters with already existed ones. But, please, don't be hard on me if I decide to change your idea in order to fit to my own thoughts.

Also, you can use other characters from my games. For example I thought about getting back Natalia from Red Heat and add one superheroine and one supervillain.

In general, post everything that you have came up with and I will mix it in order to have solid idea.
Ok, thanks for that. Just to clarify one other thing. Do the characters specifically have to be Supervillains or Superheroines? Or can we have normal humans/civilians as well? For example, I was thinking maybe this could be a good chance to have Diva Mizuki show up as a damsel in distress that you help rescue from the Villain? That'd also help satisfy all the people in the forums who are always asking for more of Mizuki.
Did you just say Diva Mizuki? Yeah, that'd be awesome!
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Sat Mar 24, 2018 11:13 pm

You can post up to 3 characters. I would like to see the new superheroine and new supervillain among them. You can even submit just one character. I don't mind.

About the owners of characters.... Please, the idea writers (and the owners of characters), let us know if you ok that users use your characters. I think it will be awesome.
crocdeloup
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Sun Mar 25, 2018 9:23 am

Hello, I finished my scenario for this submission but I can not find a good title if you with ideas I am open to any proposal.

I post it here for improvement after notice so do not hesitate to criticism is told me if you like it.

I am the first post a valid idea for this special submission, I hope you work too on ideas that will be a pity of default

Scenario:
Black cat flies for weeks to the museums of the city to face the juggs officer asks Watson to recruit 2 super heroines able to take it to his own game.
To start the wasp a discretion specialist like black cat (ability to shrink mastery electricity is a wasp wing when she wants).
The second miss martian a specialty of disguise (metamorph and telepathic).

Character:
Officer juggs: previous game
Watson Officers: previous game

The Wasp (real name Zazzala):
General + body:
https://rule34.paheal.net/post/view/1873434#search=Wasp

Clothers:
https://cs.sankakucomplex.com/data/f6/e ... Hl-zStndeQ
Swimsuit for sex scene: https://img.rule34.xxx//images/1439/61b ... ng?2705977

Miss martian (real name Megan):
General: https://pre00.deviantart.net/e701/th/pr ... 9xgmys.png

Body:
https://cdnio.luscious.net/DirtyOldMan/ ... .315x0.jpg

Bayonetta transformation (includes clothing):
https://cs.sankakucomplex.com/data/e5/8 ... g2dbOLw5yw

black cat (real name Felicia):
general:
https://cs.sankakucomplex.com/data/samp ... PnpbPmlB3A

body:
https://cs.sankakucomplex.com/data/samp ... uXlYr9PEfQ

Scene 1:
Officer Juggs asks Watson to recruit them and him their address time.
Juggs: Watson I have a new job for you.
A big deal getting ready is I'm going to need some reinforcement.
I charge you to recruit super heroin.
I note on this paper their name of super heroine, their real name and their address.
Watson: Ok, I'm off right now.

Scene 2:
Watson arrives in front of a large isolated house on the edge of town.
He knocks on the door, no one. But he hears noise in the garden
He walks carefully.
A woman is lying by the pool.
Zazzala:
Hello, officer why are you bothering me?
Watson:
Hello, I am the officer Watson of the police of mnf city I am looking for Zazzala said the wasp is it you?
Zazzala:
Yes, it's me
Watson:
I come to ask for your help from the officer juggs, currently the city is facing a theft number in the museums of the city. What do you think? could you help us?
Zazzala:
Officer juggs of the said? would not she sleep with anyone during this mission?
(Zazzala is fed up with the fact that it is the juggs officer who is harvesting the laurels for the Zazzala mission that is performed in secret, Zazzala is an officer juggs we work a long time together)
Watson:
The juggs officer is a very respectful woman you knew!
Zazzala:
As for your business I think I can help you but what do I gain from it?
Watson:
I have good argument that the recognition of your previous mission is a very good salary.
Zazzala:
The money does not interest me however I see that I make you an officer effect! ( to laugh)
I have a proposal to make to you.
I help you and in return you pay me in kind in addition to what you offer me!
Watson:
All right, it's ok to meet tomorrow at the central police station for your briefing.
(Watson starts to leave)
Zazzala:
Wait a second you really believe that you will leave without paying me a lead!

Sex scene 1:
Position:
https://cs.sankakucomplex.com/data/samp ... Bin_yyLnFg

vaginal fuck + after medium breast release

Scene 3:
Watson goes to Miss Martian's home in a discreet downtown property
Watson knocks on the door. A grandmother opens the door
Watson:
Surprised. Bubble of thought (uh, I was wrong address?)
Megan: hello, what is it for?
Watson:
Hello I'm the officer Watson, I'm looking for Megan Morse it's good here?
Megan:
Why are you looking for it?
Watson:
It is officer juggs who sent me there are flights in town, we need his help.
Megan:
Very good, you can between

Watson enters the apartment
The grandmother closes the door
Megan: sorry for this masquerade (coming from behind Watson)

Watson turns around and sees miss martian
Megan: I take the appearance of a grandmother to ward off the curious
My green skin is not the most discreet
Watson: The main thing is that I found you
I will be directed the mission is to stop Black cat.
She steals works of art from all over the city.

Megan: I've been in town for a while and you already came to see me you really needed help
Alright I'll help you but I hope it will be fast
Watson: thank you miss martian. See you tomorrow at the central police station for your briefing.
Megan: See you tomorrow then ...
Watson: I forget you did not have to transfigure yourself in the police station so take your precautions.

Scene 4:
Briefing room with a video projector
Present in the room:
The officer juggs; Officer Watson; The Wasp; miss martian

Juggs: Let's start first and foremost our criminal.
Black cat, we identified it thanks to the camera of the West museum that it robs there is little. (She shows pictures)
We know what will bring this museum back soon.
Watson: How did you know?
Juggs: Because we will soon be transferring an invaluable jewel to this museum, I'm sure it will try to steal it.

Let's move on to our plan to stop it.
(Juggs shows the map of the museum)
The last time she came in going through the ventilation system.
To prevent this happening again the wasp will patrol the ventilation system
Miss Martian and Watson. You will be in charge of patrolling inside the museum by disguise yourself in vigil will not be a problem for you miss martian?

Megan: easy is I even have an idea in case she spot us, I will take the appearance of Watson like that it will not be that we are 2.

Juggs: very good idea miss martian!
To finish me and my men we will take care of the outside surveillance.
Okay with you ?
Everyone: yes!

Scene 5:
In the night museum
The team has been in place for 5 hours already is still no sign of black cat
Miss martian and Watson pose together (miss martian looks like Watson)

Watson: how are you going to be bored in this museum
Megan: we are quiet to visit but we are bored seriously
If it tells you we can have a little fun not to fall asleep ...
Watson: what are you thinking?
Megan: Officer juggs she does not excite you true ...
Watson: how are you? You do not fool anyone, I saw how you look at her during the briefing.
And so how is it fun?
Megan: because I can do that ... (Megan I turn into officer juggs)
Watson: it's crazy it's more real than nature!
I can see it's tits?
Megan: I was just waiting for that.
She releases its tits
Watson: they are divine!
You can transform yourself to infinity ??
Megan: Yes, as long as I've seen the person
Watson: I would like to see some video game character in real life but you do not have to know
Megan: it's not a problem I can read in you think.
For me to see it is enough that you think about the personage.
Watson: let's go!
Megan turns into bayonetta
Megan: Awesome, I'm never seen such a perverse mind.

Sex scene 2
Position : https://cs.sankakucomplex.com/data/de/7 ... mT5W8VGVww

Miss Martian is under the appearance of Bayonetta clothing included:
https://rule34.xxx//images/1439/707cb40 ... ng?2706014

After fuck:
Megan resumes her normal physique
The alarm goes off
Megan: quick it must be black cat who steals the jewel!
To kiss while making metamorphosis my exhausting I cannot move.
Try to hold her in the museum waiting for the Wasp should not delay to come in reinforcement.

Scene 6:
Watson runs to the jewel room
Black cat running away passes Watson
Watson takes the opportunity for the floor plate
Watson: In his head (yes, I caught him but why is his clothes torn?)
Watson's cock rubs on black cat's pussy
Black cat: that's what I feel on my clit? your weapon?
Watson: I'll say it's a special weapon! do you want to see how it works?
Black Cat: If that's what I think, in my current situation as much study the new "weapon" of my enemies.
Sex scene 3:
The combination of black cat is torn like this:
https://cs.sankakucomplex.com/data/b3/6 ... 2bt4hk2Byw

Position (on the floor):
https://cs.sankakucomplex.com/data/79/8 ... rQrf1sLgfg

Scene 7:
Officer juggs enters the room

Juggs: uh ...? what's going on?
Watson: officer juggs (embarrassed), I wanted to retain black cat and the situation has slipped.
Juggs: Well, I'm closing my eyes for this time. Very good job Mr. Watson!

Black cat is stopping is driving to prison

After one week:

Scene 8:
Juggs summons Watson to his office
Juggs: I have bad news Black cat is already Escape, she left a business card for you.
On the map: see you soon, Watson, for the pleasure of seeing your "weapon" again. (With a kiss to red lip on the map)
Expecting the mayor told me to congratulate you for your hard work and he added that you could ask what you want as a reward for arrest black cat although it is escape.
Watson: I have an idea but I want my colleagues who participate in the survey to benefit as well.
Juggs: what do you want?
Watson you let us fuck you, the Wasp and miss martian
Juggs: It's okay and that's what motivates you guys may work harder.
If they know that at the end of each difficult investigation they will be entitled to this kind of reward they will be more successful at work.

Sex scene 4:
Position: https://cs.sankakucomplex.com/data/f1/2 ... oU6vlpR-bg
The Wasp on the left; officer juggs in the center; miss martian (normal appearance) right
End
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Sun Mar 25, 2018 6:11 pm

crocdeloup wrote:
Sun Mar 25, 2018 9:23 am
Hello, I finished my scenario for this submission but I can not find a good title if you with ideas I am open to any proposal.

I post it here for improvement after notice so do not hesitate to criticism is told me if you like it.

I am the first post a valid idea for this special submission, I hope you work too on ideas that will be a pity of default
Ok, i don't have the time to read the whole thing right now, but I've had a quick scan through it and I can tell you 2 things.

1: Vadim said in the submission request, I would like to offer to you to submit 3 (or less) female characters you would like to see in this episode the most and 1 pose for each of the character. I took that to mean that he only want's 3 sex scenes at most. So if that is true you'll need to remove one of them.

2: You can't use Officer Juggs in the last sex scene for 2 reasons.
  1. She is Serrated's character and he doesn't let anyone use her in their ideas if she gets involved in any of the sex scenes. If you ask him, she can appear in the background or be used for story purposes (like in the first XXX Files), but that's it.
  • This game is going to be made by Vadim, not Serega, and Serrated only wants Serega to make his Officer Juggs games.
crocdeloup
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Sun Mar 25, 2018 6:27 pm

If I remove the juggs officer from the sex scene to put Black cat in the place I can keep for the rest of the scene.
And i do not know if i can let the transformation to show the juggs officer's breasts by miss martian

Answer me quickly like that i could change the miss martian transformation for another character.
Sexy Mizuki
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Mon Mar 26, 2018 1:17 am

We need one with Diva Mizuki!!!
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Mon Mar 26, 2018 1:19 am

Jimjim3DX wrote:
Sat Mar 24, 2018 5:23 pm
mnf_vadim wrote:
Sat Mar 24, 2018 1:04 pm
Please, submit up to NEW 3 characters in one "idea". Feel free to describe them in details and tell the background. I don't mind if you post the idea that will connect these characters with already existed ones. But, please, don't be hard on me if I decide to change your idea in order to fit to my own thoughts.

Also, you can use other characters from my games. For example I thought about getting back Natalia from Red Heat and add one superheroine and one supervillain.

In general, post everything that you have came up with and I will mix it in order to have solid idea.
Ok, thanks for that. Just to clarify one other thing. Do the characters specifically have to be Supervillains or Superheroines? Or can we have normal humans/civilians as well? For example, I was thinking maybe this could be a good chance to have Diva Mizuki show up as a damsel in distress that you help rescue from the Villain? That'd also help satisfy all the people in the forums who are always asking for more of Mizuki.
Yes!!!! I support!!!!
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Mon Mar 26, 2018 8:30 am

crocdeloup wrote:
Sun Mar 25, 2018 6:27 pm
If I remove the juggs officer from the sex scene to put Black cat in the place I can keep for the rest of the scene.
And i do not know if i can let the transformation to show the juggs officer's breasts by miss martian

Answer me quickly like that i could change the miss martian transformation for another character.
Yes, you have to remove Officer Juggs from the sex scene.
And I would remove the part where she transforms into Juggs, because I'm not sure how much animation Vadim is allowed to do with her.

Also, I'm trying to read through your idea, but I'm finding it hard to understand what you mean at times because, no offence, but your English is bad.
For example:
Miss Martian and Watson. You will be in charge of patrolling inside the museum by disguise yourself in vigil will not be a problem for you miss martian?

Megan: easy is I even have an idea in case she spot us, I will take the appearance of Watson like that it will not be that we are 2.

Juggs: very good idea miss martian!
How is Miss Martian changing to look like Watson a good idea? I just don't understand what you mean by "like that it will not be that we are 2".
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Mon Mar 26, 2018 9:53 am

We need to definitely add Diva Mizuki to this one!!!
crocdeloup
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Mon Mar 26, 2018 3:48 pm

Thank you for your advice Kelumir, I will correct for the submission.
As I already said I am French, English is not my mother tongue and I have a little trouble so if he has mis-sayings like your example, it will be great if you could help me .
In the sentence that you put more to the I wanted to say that miss martian that transforms into Watson to make believe that there is only one vigil.
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