MNF Metropolis Episode 2 - Planning Thread

[Kelumir]

Alright, here you go. The fixes have been made.

Just remember not to just copy from the post. You won't get the complete links if you do.

The XXX Files: Episode 2 - A Thief in the City.

Scenario:
Black Cat has been robbing the cities museums for weeks. Officer Juggs asks Watson to recruit 2 super heroines able to beat her at her own game.
The first is the Wasp, a discretion specialist like Black Cat, with her ability to shrink, mastery of electricity, and ablity to fly with her wasp wings whenever she wants.
The second is Miss Martian, a master of disguise with her shapeshifting and telepathy.

Character:
Officer Juggs: previous game
Watson Officers: previous game

The Wasp (real name Zazzala):
General + body:
https://rule34.paheal.net/post/view/1873434#search=Wasp

Clothes:
https://cs.sankakucomplex.com/data/f6/e ... Hl-zStndeQ
Swimsuit for sex scene:
https://img.rule34.xxx//images/1439/61b ... ng?2705977

Miss Martian (real name Megan):
General:
https://pre00.deviantart.net/e701/th/pr ... 9xgmys.png

Body:
https://cdnio.luscious.net/DirtyOldMan/ ... .315x0.jpg

Bayonetta transformation (includes clothing) (second from the right):
https://cs.sankakucomplex.com/data/e5/8 ... g2dbOLw5yw

black cat (real name Felicia):
General:
https://cs.sankakucomplex.com/data/samp ... PnpbPmlB3A

Body:
https://cs.sankakucomplex.com/data/samp ... uXlYr9PEfQ

Scene 1:
Officer Juggs asks Watson to recruit the Wasp and Miss Martian and gives him their addresses.
Juggs: Watson, I have a new job for you.
A thief has been breaking into various museums across the city and I want you to put a stop to their crime spree. This is a big deal, so you’re going to need some reinforcements.
I know of two individuals who should be able to help you. I’m going to note down their addresses on this paper. Do no lose this.
Watson: Yes chief. I'll head out right away.

Scene 2:
Watson arrives in front of a large isolated house on the edge of town. He knocks on the door, but no one answers. He then hears a noise coming from the garden
He walks around carefully and sees a woman is lying by the pool.
Zazzala: Hello, officer why are you in my garden?
Watson: Hello ma’am. I’m officer Watson of the MnFMPD. I’m looking for a Miss Zazzala. Would that be you?
Zazzala: Yes, that's me. Why are you here?
Watson: I come to ask for your help. The city is currently facing a series of thefts from a number in the cities museums. Do you think you could help us?
Zazzala: Hmm, I think I can help you. But what do I gain from it?
Watson: I’m sure the mayor’s office would be more than willing to pay you in recognition of your services.
Zazzala: The money does not interest me. However, I see that I have an effect on you officer! (Laughs)
I have a proposal for you.
I’ll help you, and in return, you’ll pay me in kind in addition to what you’ve already offered me.
Watson: All right, you’ve got a deal. We’ll meet tomorrow at the central police station for your briefing.
(Watson starts to leave)
Zazzala: Wait a second. Do you really think that you’re gonna leave without paying me up front?

Sex scene 1:
Position:
https://cs.sankakucomplex.com/data/samp ... Bin_yyLnFg

vaginal fuck + after medium breast release

Scene 3:
Watson goes to Miss Martian's home in a discreet downtown property. Watson knocks on the door and an old woman opens the door. Watson is a little surprised to see her.
Watson, Thought Bubble: (Huh? Did I come to the wrong address?)
Megan: Hello dearie. What can I do for you?
Watson: Hello ma’am. I'm officer Watson and I'm looking for a Megan Morse. Does she live here?
Megan: Why are you looking for her?
Watson: There have been a series of museum robberies across the city and we need her help.
Megan: I see. Well, why don’t you come inside.

Watson enters the apartment and the old woman closes the door.
Megan: Sorry for this masquerade. (Says a voice coming from behind Watson.)
Watson turns around and sees Miss Martian.
Megan: I take the appearance of an old woman to ward off the curious. My green skin is not the most discreet.
Watson: That’s alright. The main thing is that I found you. I’ve been instructed to stop a thief who has been stealing works of art from all over the city.
Megan: Right. I've been in town for a while and I’ve heard about that. You really must need help if you’re coming to see me.
Watson: Does that mean I can count on your assistance?
Megan: Alright, I'll help you out. But I hope this will be over with quickly.
Watson: Thank you Miss Martian. I’ll see you tomorrow at the central police station for your briefing.
Megan: See you tomorrow then.
Watson: Oh, and before I forget, you won’t have to disguise yourself while in the police station.

Scene 4:
Briefing room with a video projector.
Present in the room:
Officer Juggs, Officer Watson, The Wasp and Miss Martian.

Juggs: Let's start first and foremost with our criminal. Black cat.
We identified her thanks to one of the security cameras from the West museum when she robbed it a few days ago. (She shows pictures.)
We know that she will return to this museum soon, because we will soon be transferring an invaluable jewel to this museum. I'm sure she will try to steal it.
Let's move on to our plan to stop her.
(Juggs shows the map of the museum)
The last time she came in going through the ventilation system. To prevent this happening again, Wasp will patrol the ventilation system. Miss Martian and Watson, you two will be in charge of patrolling inside the museum by disguising yourselves. That won’t be a problem for you, right Miss Martian?
Megan: Easy. I even have an idea for when she comes. I’ll make myself look like Watson, that she’ll think there’s only one guard rather than there being two of us.
Juggs: Good idea Miss Martian.
And to finish up, myself and several other officers will take care of the exterior surveillance. That okay with everyone?
Everyone: Yes ma’am.

Scene 5:
In the museum in the middle of the night.
The team has been in place for 5 hours already, and there is still no sign of Black Cat.
Miss Martian and Watson are standing together, and Miss Martian currently looks just like Watson.

Watson: It’s been 5 hours already. I can’t believe she isn’t here yet.
Megan: I know, it’s so quiet and I’m starting to get bored.
Hmm, I have an idea. Why don’t we have a little fun so we don’t fall asleep.
Watson: Hm, what are you talking about?
Megan closes her eyes and touches Watson's forehead
Watson: What are you doing?
Megan: Don’t worry. I just read your mind
Watson: And how is that fun?
Megan: Because I can do this.
Megan turns into Officer Juggs.

Watson: Why did you turn into Officer Juggs? What did you read in my mind?
Megan: I wanted to see what you were thinking about and I wasn’t disappointed! I've never seen such a perverse mind. (This excites Miss Martian.)
Watson: Uh... (He’s a bit embarrassed.)
Megan: I can change to look like anyone. Who would you enjoy from everything you've seen?
Watson: Are you serious? You want to change to match my fantasies?
Megan: Yes, and I can read your thoughts to visualize them. For me to see someone is usually enough, but you could think about the person.
Watson: Ok, let's do it!
Megan: Alright. Now, who would you like me to turn into?
Watson: Hmm... Bayonetta. She’s a video game heroine who I’ve been fantasizing about for years.
(Megan reads Watson’s mind and turns into Bayonetta.)
https://rule34.xxx//images/1439/707cb40 ... ng?2706014

Sex scene 2
Position:
https://cs.sankakucomplex.com/data/de/7 ... mT5W8VGVww

Miss Martian Looks like Bayonetta in this scene, including her clothing.

After the sex scene, Megan returns to her normal appearance and the alarm goes off.
Megan: Quick! It must be Black Cat!
I shouldn’t have done that, because now I’m too exhausted to move. Try to keep her in the museum while you wait for Wasp and the rest of the reinforcements.

Scene 6:
Watson runs towards the room where the jewel is being kept. Meanwhile, Black cat is running away down the same corridor towards Watson, having just stolen it, and for some reason her clothes are torn. As she’s looking back over her shoulder, Watson takes the opportunity while she isn’t paying attention and tackles her.

Black Cat is now lying on the ground with Watson on top of her.

Black Cat’s costume is torn like this:
https://cs.sankakucomplex.com/data/b3/6 ... 2bt4hk2Byw

Watson, Thought Bubble: (Yes! I’ve got her! But, why are her clothes torn?)
As he’s lying on top of her, Watson's cock rubs against Black Cat's ass and soon gets hard.
Black Cat: Huh? What’s that on my ass? Is that your weapon?
Watson: Well, I'd say it is a special weapon.
Black Cat: Mmm. Do you want to show me how it works? I’ve got a little time before I need to leave for my next heist.
Watson: Sorry Black Cat, but you’re not getting away this time. Though I think I could let you have a little fun before you’re arrested.

Sex scene 3:
Position (on the floor):
https://cs.sankakucomplex.com/data/79/8 ... rQrf1sLgfg

Scene 7:
Officer Juggs enters the room

Juggs: Huh...? What's Going On!?
Watson: O-Officer Juggs!? (embarrassed)
I-I was trying to detain Black Cat and the situation just sort of, slipped.
Juggs: Well, I'll close my eyes while you get your pants back on. Good job Officer Watson!
Black Cat has been stopped and the only place she’s going is prison.

Scene 8:
One week later:

Juggs summons Watson to his office
Juggs: Please sit-down Watson. I have some good news, and some bad news.
Watson: What is it ma’am?
Juggs: The bad news is, Black Cat has escape, and she left a calling card for you.
She hands Watson a note:
See you soon Officer Watson. I look forward to seeing your "weapon" again. (With a red lipstick kiss on it.)
Watson: Damn it. And we went through so much to get her. What’s the good news?
Juggs: The mayor told me to congratulate you for your hard work, and he added that you could ask for whatever you want as a reward for arresting Black Cat, even though she did escape.
Watson: Really? I'll remember that if I need help with a future investigation.
(To give something for the next XXX Files game.)

To be continued...

[crocdeloup]

Thank you for your help !
For my future game idea I could ask you to correct me?

[Kelumir]

Thank you for your help !
For my future game idea I could ask you to correct me?

Sure.
Though I ask that you try to be a bit more detailed, as that would make my job easier.

[crocdeloup]

Great ! I will try detailed in the future.

[fcrivers]

I would advise Vadim to keep using his own ideas and forget the ones being voted. they are wack as heck, literally will ruin the plot as it is.

Vadim please consider not using the ideas submitted and going with what you feel is right... You can easily add Natalya but a lot of these "superheroes" are wack as fuck.

I loved the first one but I can feel the sequel going in the wrong direction if you listen to these dudes.

Diva mizuki and Baka? make that shit a separate game, they aren't even in the MNF world.

The other idea could be voted as an independent idea aswell, not even related to the first game.

Consider doing a sequel to the first one, no crappy new characters, just some good ol' MnF world original characters.

[Jimjim3DX]

I would advise Vadim to keep using his own ideas and forget the ones being voted. they are wack as heck, literally will ruin the plot as it is.

Vadim please consider not using the ideas submitted and going with what you feel is right... You can easily add Natalya but a lot of these "superheroes" are wack as fuck.

I loved the first one but I can feel the sequel going in the wrong direction if you listen to these dudes.

Diva mizuki and Baka? make that shit a separate game, they aren't even in the MNF world.

The other idea could be voted as an independent idea aswell, not even related to the first game.

Consider doing a sequel to the first one, no crappy new characters, just some good ol' MnF world original characters.

I’ll be totally honest, I wouldn’t have even used Diva Mizuki if I’d know Serega was working on a new Mizuki game. I’ve been in contact with Vadim and told him that I’m happy to change my ideas a bit if it wins. I just wanted to help him make the game he wanted to make. That’s why I didn’t go ahead and write the entire script before hand, I wanted to make sure I worked with Vadim’s ideas.

That being said, I don’t see why Diva Mizuki can’t fit in then MnF Metropolis word? I mean, it’s just one of the various city’s out there if you consider it to be all inter-connected of whatever. According to the “lore” established in the previous Mizuki games, She’s a world famous pornstar who is currently on tour. There’s no reason why MnF Metropolis couldn’t be one of her stops on the tour.

As for the superheroine in my idea, I would have liked to use Mighty Mom, but was leaving it open Incase somebody else wanted to submit ideas for a cool original super heroine. But nobody did despite there being an entire week to submit ideas. It’s not like members didn’t have a chance to submit something. We even had this thread here to group discuss/collaborate. So I’d say it’s a bit late now to be totally fair

But again, this thread isn’t going anywhere and If you’ve got issues with the Diva Mizuki idea I’d be happy to listen to them. But I don’t agree with the idea that she’s completely out of place in an MnF Metropolis setting. And it’s possible that Serrated might be designing a new superheroine for this game since I agree atleast that the other 3 heroines from the alternate idea really can’t be considered MnF characters even with stretched logic.

I just wanted to clarify that my intentions are to help write a proper sequel that feels like the first one. And not an entirely different feeling game.

[crocdeloup]

hello, I write the other idea.

you are right the characters I use do not incorporate very well to the rest since they are already existing characters. I think to submit the idea later with his own universe based on a parody of comics (mix DC and Marvel universes).

In replaces officer Juggs by Miss Marvel and Watson by agent coulson

I would like to know what you think!

[fcrivers]

You are biased towards Mizuki, she doesnt fit the lore. just because she is "on tour" she HAS to be in MnF Metropolis? there are a ton other characters that would fit the lore way better, MnF Reporter, Cassie Cannons, Natalya, Mighty Mom, Busty Bomber, With permission Officer Juggs even. But YOU want to force Mizuki in a scene she has nothing to add, she would literally be either a) caught and fucked b) a random fuck.

As I said, make more Mizuki mini-games, with their own lore and stuff. No need to force her to a world she has nothing to add.

Regarding MnF Metropolis Episode 2 I think what we are missing is more supervillains, girls with way to get power and cause destruction. Busty Bomber was always a weak supervillain, we see her son doing more sht than her, we need someone who strikes fear, who can make bad sht happen, so when we get to punish her, it feels more rewarding. Obviously that for this we would need a new supervillain, and I hope Vadim is working on one.

[Jimjim3DX]

You are biased towards Mizuki, she doesnt fit the lore. just because she is "on tour" she HAS to be in MnF Metropolis? there are a ton other characters that would fit the lore way better, MnF Reporter, Cassie Cannons, Natalya, Mighty Mom, Busty Bomber, With permission Officer Juggs even. But YOU want to force Mizuki in a scene she has nothing to add, she would literally be either a) caught and fucked b) a random fuck.

As I said, make more Mizuki mini-games, with their own lore and stuff. No need to force her to a world she has nothing to add.

Regarding MnF Metropolis Episode 2 I think what we are missing is more supervillains, girls with way to get power and cause destruction. Busty Bomber was always a weak supervillain, we see her son doing more sht than her, we need someone who strikes fear, who can make bad sht happen, so when we get to punish her, it feels more rewarding. Obviously that for this we would need a new supervillain, and I hope Vadim is working on one.

We'll just have to disagree then. If you say that then I could almost as easily argue that you are biased against Mizuiki and want to keep her out of the lore. She's not going to be a recurring character, think of it as a "crossover" or a "cool reference" if you really can't get over it. she doesn't HAVE to be in MnF Metropolis but that's where the game is set so duh she has to be there if she's in the game at all Are you going to try and tell me Baka is not acceptable as an MnF Metropolis Character when he's even in a few of them like one of the Boom Town games?

In any-case, like you said Mizuki is barely in the game, she's just the missing person in the case you have to solve and you get to fuck her near the end. The game will also have Natalya and either Mighty Mom or a new Serrated Super-heroine, plus you're stil working for officer Juggs so It's not like you aren't getting what you want. Not all villains have to be super powered females. It sounds like you want an almost carbon copy of the previous game? I'm sure there will be more episodes in the future with plenty of female super villains and recurring MNF metropolis characters.

In this episode I just wanted to try something a little different and not have the main antagonist be a super villaness. Watson works for a new department that investigates both superhero/supervillain and paranormal activity so there's a wide array of mystery cases he can be tasked with solving. Wouldn't it be a bit repetitive and boring if every episode was pretty similar just swapping around the heroes and vilians watson get's to have sex with?

I'll just end on what I said originally, which was that I wouldn't have considered Mizuki if I'd known she was in an upcoming Serega Game. However, that's what I'm working with and that's what I'm writing a script for, so I'll try my best to make it keep the spirit of the last game. Plus I'm going to be working with Serrated to make sure the script is good, feels like the last game and since it involves some of his characters. And if none of that reassures you then at least take solace in the fact that this will be standalone episode so if people don't like how it turned out than they can ignore it when writing/submitting for episode 3.

[junky]

You are biased towards Mizuki, she doesnt fit the lore. just because she is "on tour" she HAS to be in MnF Metropolis? there are a ton other characters that would fit the lore way better, MnF Reporter, Cassie Cannons, Natalya, Mighty Mom, Busty Bomber, With permission Officer Juggs even. But YOU want to force Mizuki in a scene she has nothing to add, she would literally be either a) caught and fucked b) a random fuck.

As I said, make more Mizuki mini-games, with their own lore and stuff. No need to force her to a world she has nothing to add.

Regarding MnF Metropolis Episode 2 I think what we are missing is more supervillains, girls with way to get power and cause destruction. Busty Bomber was always a weak supervillain, we see her son doing more sht than her, we need someone who strikes fear, who can make bad sht happen, so when we get to punish her, it feels more rewarding. Obviously that for this we would need a new supervillain, and I hope Vadim is working on one.

We'll just have to disagree then. If you say that then I could almost as easily argue that you are biased against Mizuiki and want to keep her out of the lore. She's not going to be a recurring character, think of it as a "crossover" or a "cool reference" if you really can't get over it. she doesn't HAVE to be in MnF Metropolis but that's where the game is set so duh she has to be there if she's in the game at all Are you going to try and tell me Baka is not acceptable as an MnF Metropolis Character when he's even in a few of them like one of the Boom Town games?

In any-case, like you said Mizuki is barely in the game, she's just the missing person in the case you have to solve and you get to fuck her near the end. The game will also have Natalya and either Mighty Mom or a new Serrated Super-heroine, plus you're stil working for officer Juggs so It's not like you aren't getting what you want. Not all villains have to be super powered females. It sounds like you want an almost carbon copy of the previous game? I'm sure there will be more episodes in the future with plenty of female super villains and recurring MNF metropolis characters.

In this episode I just wanted to try something a little different and not have the main antagonist be a super villaness. Watson works for a new department that investigates both superhero/supervillain and paranormal activity so there's a wide array of mystery cases he can be tasked with solving. Wouldn't it be a bit repetitive and boring if every episode was pretty similar just swapping around the heroes and vilians watson get's to have sex with?

I'll just end on what I said originally, which was that I wouldn't have considered Mizuki if I'd known she was in an upcoming Serega Game. However, that's what I'm working with and that's what I'm writing a script for, so I'll try my best to make it keep the spirit of the last game. Plus I'm going to be working with Serrated to make sure the script is good, feels like the last game and since it involves some of his characters. And if none of that reassures you then at least take solace in the fact that this will be standalone episode so if people don't like how it turned out than they can ignore it when writing/submitting for episode 3.

When saying "We'll just have to disagree" speak for yourself cuz I'm in part agree with fcrivers, cuz MNF Metropoli XXX Files in the beginning was an idea including opposites, I mean supers vs s. villains, cops vs bandits and so. Mizuki is a good character but she just doesn't fit in there.
Your idea is winning cuz there's no other good ideas in the voting list for the sequel. I know that was rude but that's the truth, sorry.

The idea is good I'm not saying that is bad but this idea rather would be good for a other game instead (not a sequel to this one).