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Kelumir
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Tue Dec 05, 2017 6:51 am

Hey people.

I'm reviving a thread from the old forum that I started. The idea of this thread is that it's a place where people can post their ideas and get feedback on them.

And to start it off, I have a new script I just finished. This is my script for Harper’s Christmas Mission II and I'd love to know what you think of it. Sadly I can't submit it now, because I have an idea on the production list, so it won't be till next year that I actually submit it. Anyway, here it it. Let me know what you think. ;)


Harper’s Christmas Mission II

Note – to try and avoid confusion, paragraphs with quotation marks “” are meant to be in-game text.


Short Version:
For the last couple of years, Harper has been enjoying life with his new charge and things couldn’t be better. However, an old enemy is about to resurface and Harper is called into action once again.

Long Version:
Scene 1: Introduction

Game starts with Harper and another agent arriving back in the F.T.S.F. hangar. The agent next to Harper is covered in some sort of slime, while Harper himself is completely clean and looking a little smug. The two of them are standing next to a sort of futuristic helicopter.
Harper:
https://image.ibb.co/n1hRHb/image.png
F.T.S.F. Banner:
https://ibb.co/hqjhEQ
The hangar and the chopper:
https://ibb.co/bzojgR
https://ibb.co/bVCPTk

Note for Kosmos – Since the other agent only appears in this scene, you can make them look however you want.

Agent: Urrgh... Thank God that mission’s over.
Harper: Well I told you poking those pods was a bad idea.
Agent: Yea, yeah. Well I really need a drink after that. I’m gonna hit the Drunken Leprechaun after I wash this gunk off. You in?
Harper: Nah. I’m just gonna head home.
Agent: Oh yeah. You got that hot little love toy at home don’t cha? You know I’m still waiting for you to introduce me to her.
Harper: Forget it. You think I’m ever gonna introduce you to a girl after what happened with you and Jay’s cousin?
Agent: Oh come on. It wasn’t that bad. So we lost a couple of toes.
Harper: Exactly. That’s why it’s never gonna happen.

Their conversation is then interrupted by a voice coming through on the speaker system.

Chief: Harper! My Office! Now!
Agent: Uh-oh. If the chief wants to see you, it can’t be good.
Harper: Yeah. I better go see what he wants. I’ll see you later.

Scene 2:
Scene changes to the chief’s office. The chief is a giant muscular Minotaur in a rather sharp suit. He’s sitting behind his desk as Harper comes in.
Chief Tauron:
https://image.ibb.co/gbAkAw/image.png

Harper: Chief Tauron. You wanted to see me sir?
Chief Tauron: Yes Harper. Come in and sit down, there’s something I need to talk to you about.
Harper: Yes sir. What is it?
Chief Tauron: Do you remember your assignment from last year? Where you rescued Santa from the Ice Witch Priscilla.
Harper: Yes sir, I remember. Besides, it’s kind of hard to forget since Priscilla’s now living with me. Is, there now a problem with that?
Chief Tauron: No, that’s not what this is about. This is about her apprentice, Regina.

A thought bubble pops up with an image of Regina the Ice Mage as Harper remembers what she looked like.
https://image.ibb.co/fziSOG/image.png

Harper: Right. I remember her. She was the one guarding the Flame Sceptre. While I got Santa back to the North Pole, the detention team went in, but she was nowhere to be found. Does this mean she’s resurfaced?
Chief Tauron: Indeed, she has. As you know we’ve been trying to track her movements, and from what little intelligence we’ve been able to gather, since her escape, she’s studied and mastered fire magic, and now she’s known as the ‘Frozen Flame Empress’. She dropped off our radar for a while, but she’s recently re-emerged at Priscilla’s former castle.
Harper: That’s very interesting sir, but I already gave you all the information I could get about her from Priscilla. So, what does this have to do with me?
Chief Tauron: Well, several hours, this note was found outside the facility. It’s address to you.
The Chief holds up an envelope and hands it to Harper. He opens it and reads the note.

“Harper,

Two years ago, you humiliated me and my Mistress. Since then, I have dedicated myself to mastering the power of flames, so the cheap trick you played with the Flame Sceptre shall not work again. And now, I am ready to exact my revenge.
I have taken your precious Sandi Claus and returned to my Mistress’ former domain. You have until midnight on Christmas Eve to face me. Alone.
Fail to comply with any of my demands, and no one will ever see her again.

Regards,
Regina, the Great Frozen Flame Empress.”

Harper: Oh my god.
Chief Tauron: Naturally, we’re taking this very seriously. A few of the bureaucratic big wigs wanted to just send in a swat team. We sent a drone to survey the area, and it showed that she’s set up a barrier that will alert her if anyone other than you approaches. So if we try to send anyone else in, she’ll know and disappear before they can even get close to the castle. So right now, you’re our only hope.
Harper: Me? But... I was only able to beat her last time because of the fire crystal I got from Sandi. And since she’s no longer vulnerable to fire, how am I supposed to beat her?
Chief Tauron: Given the severity of the situation, I’ve had a word with the brass, and they’ve agreed to grant you temporary access to some relics from the restricted vault.
Chief Tauron: While her mastering fire magic has removed her vulnerability to it, it did open her up to a new weakness, lightning magic. So, you’ll be given two pieces from the vault. The first is Stormwalker, a spear forged by Hephaestus and infused with the same lightning as Zeus’ thunderbolts. The other is a Mirror shield. The shield has an enchantment on it that will reflect most magic back at the caster. These will give you your best chance against her.
Harper: Hmph. I guess this is why you insist upon us being trained in all forms of weapons and combat.
Chief Tauron: Exactly. I want all of my agents to have the best chance of coming home. Now head downstairs and gear up, there’s already a chopper prepped and waiting for you. And Harper, good luck.

Scene 3:
“After collecting Stormwalker and the Mirror shield from the vault, Harper went up to the launch bay, boarded the chopper and set off for the Ice castle.”
https://ibb.co/hnRxGR

Scene changes to the throne room of the castle. Harper now has Stormwalker and the Mirror shield. He is standing before the Frozen Flame Empress, who is sitting on the throne.
Stormwalker Spear:
https://ibb.co/cwXF36
Mirror Shield:
https://ibb.co/hiZTO6

The Frozen Flame Empress, Regina:
https://image.ibb.co/cOYoVw/image.png
A close up of her eye make-up:
https://ibb.co/gzku6G
The throne room:
https://ibb.co/j5nhi6

Regina: Hmph. So, you actually showed up. I’m not sure if that makes you brave or foolish.
Harper: Alright, well I’m here now. I’m the one you want, so let Sandi go.
Regina: Hm-hm-hm... No.
Regina: I fully intend to keep her. She’s just too cute of a toy to simply let go.
Harper: She has nothing to do with this. Let her go. Now!
Regina: Do you really think you are in a position to make demands?
Regina: Let me tell you what is going to happen. First, I shall eliminate you for the humiliation you made me suffer and turning my strong, beautiful Mistress into your obedient pet.
Regina: And once I have disposed of you, I’m going to go down to my new love dungeon to play with my new toy. And I’m going to ‘play’ with her till she loves it. Who knows, I might just make her my apprentice. Now why don’t you be a good boy, and accept your fate.
Harper: And let her become like you? I don’t think so. I’m leaving her with Sandi one way or the other.
Regina: Ha-ha-ha. Defiant until the end. Let’s see how long you last against my new power.

“With that, Regina rose from her throne while unleashing a volley of flames and huge chunks of ice straight at Harper. Diving out of the way, Harper took shelter behind a column as the barrage of fire and ice impacted where he’d just been standing. Having dodged her first attack, Harper prepared Stormwalker to counter attack. As he peered around the column, he saw Regina preparing to launch a huge fireball.”
“As it came hurtling towards him, Harper dove from his hiding spot just before it crashed into the column, shattering it and sending shards of ice flying in all directions. Raising the Mirror shield, Harper was able to protect himself from most of the flying shards, though it wasn’t large enough to block all of them. A few merely cut and scraped him, but one embedded itself into his leg.”
“As he grimaced in pain, he looked up just in time to see Regina about to unleash a torrent of flames in his direction. Bringing the shield up again, the enchantment upon it reflected Regina’s flames back towards her, forcing her to leap out of the way. Ceasing the opportunity, Harper readied Stormwalker and launched an attack of his own, blasting her with a huge bolt of lightning.”
“After the lightning strike, Harper watched as Regina shakily got back to her feet, glaring angrily at him. Raising a hand above her head, Regina formed several javelins of ice and launched them at Harper. Harper dodged the first few by rolling out of the way and used the mirror shield to deflect the last one. Raising Stormwalker once again, Harper launched another bolt of lightning.”
“Despite her weakened state, Regina was able to avoid the attack by summoning a wall of ice. For the next several minutes, the two continues to exchange blows. Soon, the throne room was decimated and the two of them ragged and tired. Bringing Stormwalker up once more, Harper launched one more bolt. This time, Regina was unable to avoid it and she went down, too exhausted to stand back up.”

Scene changes to the defeated Regina slumped on the ground, leaning on the throne in the now battle damaged throne room. Both of them look battered and bruised and their clothes are torn.

Regina, thinking to herself: (No... How... How could I lose to him again? Is... Is he really that strong? Is that why Mistress Priscilla submitted to him so willingly?)
Harper: Alright Regina, it’s over. Now where’s Sandi?
Regina: N-no. You... You are not the victor yet. I... refuse to yield.
Harper: Alright. I guess I’ll have to put you in your place again.

Sex Scene 1
Regina leans against the throne as Harper fucks her arse while holding her hair.
Position example:
https://ibb.co/d72bfm
Anal – Hot-dogging (Harper rubs his cock between her butt cheeks), Easy, Medium, Hard, Cum
Harper cums inside her arse.

Scene 4:
“After finally subduing Regina, she told Harper where Sandi was being held. Before going down to get her, he secured Regina so she wouldn’t be able to escape before the detention team arrived to collect her. Once she was secure, Harper went down to find Sandi secured in Regina’s sex dungeon. After getting her out of there, they went back to the chopper and Harper took off to take her home.”

Scene changes to Harper and Sandi inside of the chopper as they’re flying through the air.
Sandi Claus:
https://image.ibb.co/dudNqw/image.png

Sandi: Harper, are you sure you’re ok?
Harper: Don’t worry Sandi, I’m fine. I’ve been in worse states before. And I have the scars to prove it. What about you? You sure everything’s ok?
Sandi: Yes, I’m sure. She didn’t really do anything overly bad to me.
Harper: Really? If you don’t mind me asking, what exactly did she do to you?
Sandi: Well... After she kidnapped me, she took me straight to that room and strapped me into that bed. She... just got a few of her... ‘toys’ out when her barrier detected you arriving. Though, before she went to wait for you, she left a vibrator running against me.
Harper: Whoa. That’s... Uhh... That’s... Actually, I’m not sure what that is.
Sandi: Yeah. Having that going on the entire time I was listening to your battle was driving me crazy.
Sandi: Though, that does remind me. After what happened last year, I was kinda expecting you to call me or something. But I guess you were busy with the gift I got you.
Harper: Yeah, she has been keeping me pretty busy.
Sandi: Well, we have some time right now, if you’re feeling up to it.
Harper: Well, I guess I could put the ship on auto-pilot till we reach the North Pole.

Sex Scene 2
Sandi climbs onto Harpers lap and she kisses him as she rides his cock.
Position example:
https://ibb.co/bAWrD6
Vaginal – Rub, Easy, Medium, Hard, Cum
Harper cums inside her pussy.

Scene 5:
“Once Sandi was safely home, Harper returned to base and returned Stormwalker and the Mirror shield to the vault. After the medic patched him up, Chief Tauron congratulated him on a job well done and sent him home on medical leave to recover.”

Scene changes to Harper arriving back at his house, with his injuries bandaged up.
Harper: Hey, Priscilla. I’m back.

A speech bubble pops up from off screen.
Priscilla: Oh, welcome home Master Harper.

Priscilla comes into the room, and she’s wearing a new outfit.
https://image.ibb.co/e5dcOG/image.png

Priscilla: How was your... Oh my. Are you alright Master? What happened?
Harper: Don’t worry, I’m fine. Your former apprentice kidnapped Sandi Claus and I had to go in alone to save her.
Priscilla: Oh my. I’m... I’m so sorry Master. I should have done more to help you catch her. It’s my fault you got hurt.
Harper: Hey, you gave us all the information you could. You shouldn’t blame yourself. This wasn’t your fault.
Priscilla: Thank you Master. Is there anything you need or want from me?
Harper: Not right now. I’m just gonna head to my room and lie down for a bit.
Priscilla: Of course Master. I’ll get dinner started while you rest. I’ll come and wake you when it’s ready.

“After sleeping for a couple of hours, Priscilla went to wake Harper. When she entered his room, rather than simply waking him, she decided to use a more fun method that she preferred.”

Sex Scene 3
Priscilla lies between Harpers legs, wraps her tits around his cock as she sucks it.
Position example:
https://ibb.co/eMBf6R
Blowjob – Lick Tip, Easy, Medium, Hard
Titfuck – Easy, Medium, Hard, Cum
Harper cums in her mouth and over her tits.

Scene 6:
“About a week into his medical leave, Harper gets a surprise visitor.”

Scene changes to Chief Tauron standing by Harper’s front door being greeted by Priscilla.

Priscilla: Good morning Chief Tauron. Are you here to see Master Harper?
Chief Tauron: Yes Priscilla. Would you please go and fetch him.
Priscilla: Of course sir. I shall bring him right away.

Priscilla leaves, and a moment later, she returns with Harper.

Harper: Hey there Chief. I wasn’t expecting to see you till my leave was over. What’s going on?
Chief Tauron: Well Harper, there’s been an interesting development. You know what they say about lightning?
Harper: Yeah, that it never strikes twice. What does that have to do with anything?
Chief Tauron: Well, you seem to be the exception to the rule.
Harper: Huh? What are you talking about sir?
Chief Tauron: Well, I’m not sure why, but for whatever reason, when you subdued Priscilla here, she went from being one of our greatest potential threats, to being completely and utterly subservient to you. And now, it would seem it has happened again.
Priscilla: Um, sir? May I ask what you mean by that?
Chief Tauron: Well, while you were taking Sandi home, the detention team went in and this time Regina was actually detained. She’s been in detention since then, though a few days ago, she started acting oddly. It would seem that, just like Priscilla, she’s become subservient to you. Our top shrinks examined her after she started, and they determined that she isn’t faking.
Chief Tauron: The reason I’m here is because she’s started to become quite distraught about being kept separate from you. While the brass wants her locked up, they have to put her well being first. So, given how well you’ve done with Priscilla, I want to know if you’d be willing to keep an eye on Regina as well.
Harper: Seriously? The brass is ok with this?
Chief Tauron: Not completely. But given your record, they can accept it since she’ll be in the charge of a capable agent. So, what’s it going to be?
Harper: Hmm, I’m not sure. What do you think Priscilla?
Priscilla: Well, I suppose it would be nice to have company while you’re out on your assignments. But the choice is completely yours Master.
Harper: Hmm... Well, I gotta admit I often feel guilty leaving you here on your own when I head out on jobs, with no real idea how long I’m gonna be gone. Plus I feel I can trust you to keep her in line for me.
Harper: You know what Chief, sure, I’ll take her.
Chief Tauron: Alright then. I’ll get the paperwork started and she should be ready to move in in a few days.

“Several days later, all the paperwork was filed and Regina was escorted to Harper’s home.”

Scene changes to Regina standing in Harper’s front room, with Harper and Priscilla.

Regina: Hello Master Harper, thank you for accepting me. And hello Mistress Priscilla, it’s good to see you again.
Priscilla: Hello Regina. It’s good to see you again too. Though, you don’t need to call me ‘Mistress’ anymore.
Regina: Of course. My apologies. Have you been faring well?
Priscilla: Yes, I’ve been quite well. Master Harper has been most kind to me, and I have enjoyed my time with immensely.
Regina: Good. I am glad to hear it.
Harper: Sorry to interrupt. But I find all of this kind of hard to believe.
Regina: Wh-what do you mean Master?
Harper: Well, for the last two years you were preparing to try and kill me, and then you actually attempted to less than two weeks ago. And now you’re in my home because you say that now you want to be with me.
Priscilla: Well, to be fair Master, you were suspicious of me when I first came to live with you. But you trust me now, right?
Harper: Yeah, I do now. And, I guess you make a good point.
Priscilla: So, does that mean you’re going to give her a chance?
Harper: Well, I did agree to let you stay here, so I guess I already have.
Regina: Thank you Master Harper. I promise you, you shan’t regret your decision.
Priscilla: This is going to be so much fun. Master, why don’t we give Regina a properly welcome to her new home?

“5 minutes later, in Harper’s bedroom.”

Sex Scene 4
Regina lies on the bed and Priscilla kneels over her as Harper fucks both of them.
Position example:
https://ibb.co/gobrD6
Regina Vaginal – Easy, Medium, Hard, Cum
Priscilla Vaginal – Easy, Medium, Hard, Cum
Harper cums inside both of their pussies.

“Merry Christmas Everyone.”

End of game.
Options to play again and to repeat sex scenes.
mephisto666
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Tue Dec 05, 2017 4:59 pm

You sold me Kelumir, love the story. I really enjoyed the first episode you did and Sandi Clause is great character. Very nice that the Ice Queen is now a submissive sex-maid to our hero and Regina now joins her. Chugs along nicely and the threesome at the end is perfect.
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Sat Dec 23, 2017 2:51 am

Opinions Required? Fine. You're short, funny looking, and your breath stinks! But hey!...you're the one asking for opinions! :lol:
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Kelumir
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Thu Feb 01, 2018 12:18 pm

Hey guys, I just submitted my idea for this round. I know it's last minute, but it's an idea I've had for a while and I finally decided to get it done and, at the very least, I want to use this round to see what people think of it. Any way, let me know what you think. 8-)


Alistair in Cumderland
Note – to try and avoid confusion, paragraphs with quotation marks “” are meant to be in-game text.


SEX SCENE SUMMARY
For those of you who just look through for the sex scenes and don’t bother with the full script, here are the sex scenes. ;D

Characters:
Alistair Kingsleigh:

https://image.ibb.co/gSjnMw/image.png

Cheshire Catgirl:
https://image.ibb.co/mMUyTb/image.png

Bimbo Hatter:
https://image.ibb.co/mFcwEG/image.png

Milf Hare:
https://image.ibb.co/hJpbEG/image.png

White Bunny:
https://image.ibb.co/jAgZ1w/image.png

Queen of Hearts:
https://image.ibb.co/i9j9ZG/image.png

Sex Scene 1
The Cheshire Catgirl kneels on the ground and leans against a tree as Alistair kneels behind her and fucks her doggystyle.
https://ibb.co/eORRgw

Sex Scene 2
The Bimbo Hatter and the Milf Hare 69 with the Bimbo Hatter on top. The Milf Hare sucks Alistair’s cock before he then fucks the Bimbo Hatter in the arse while the girls eat each other out.
https://ibb.co/hZ2cob

Sex Scene 3
The White Bunny lies back on her bed and Alistair fucks her missionary.
https://ibb.co/h5wEZG

Sex Scene 4
Alistair lies back on the Queens bed as the Queen of Hearts rides his cock.
https://ibb.co/hiPZZG



Short Version:
Alistair Kingsleigh is a transfer student from England who has come to MnF Metropolis to study abroad. While enjoying an afternoon off in the city park, he accidentally stumbles into a bizarre world. But is any of it real?

Long Version:
Scene 1: Introduction

Scene opens on a young guy walking through a pleasant wooded area of MnF Metropolis city park on a nice sunny day.

Alistair Kingsleigh:
https://image.ibb.co/gSjnMw/image.png
https://ibb.co/gg4u4R

“Several weeks ago, Alistair Kingsleigh transferred over from his old school in England to study abroad at MnF University.”
“There were mixed feelings about his arrival amongst the student body. Most of the female students (and even a few of the female teachers) were excited to have him around, comparing him to a prince due to his good looks and British accent. Whereas the male students were annoyed about having to now compete with a Brit for the attention of the ladies.”
“With the girls making him feel welcome, Alistair soon settled in to his new school. However, their constant attention and flirting soon got overwhelming, so he decided to use a free afternoon to find a quiet place in the cities park to get a little alone time.”

Alistair: Ah, what a lovely day, I’m surprised there aren’t more people around.

As he walks through the trees, he comes across a huge old oak tree.
Alistair: Wow, look at the size of this old fella. You must have been standing here for centuries.
Alistair: Hmm… This looks like a nice quiet spot to relax in.

Alistair sits down at the base of the old oak and takes out a book from his bag.
Alistair: Ah, now then. Where was I?

Before he can start reading, he hears the ticking of a watch.
“Tick, tock, tick, tock.”

Alistair: Hm? Is that a watch?
The ticking continues.
“Tick, tock, tick, tock.”

He looks around the tree and finds that the ticking is coming from a rabbit hole.
Alistair: How did someone’s watch fall back here? Well, someone must be looking for it. I’d better hand it in.

He reaches into the hole to try and find the watch, but as he does the hole suddenly opens up and he falls inside.
Alistair: AAAHHHHHHH!!!

Scene 2:
“After falling an unknown distance and for an indeterminable amount of time, Alistair finally blacked out. When he awoke, he was completely surprisingly uninjured, though he was in the most peculiar room he’d ever seen.”

Scene changes to Alistair on the ground in the bizarre room holding his head.
Alistair: Urgh… Wha… What the hell just happened?
He looks around and sees where he is.
Alistair: What the? Where the hell am I?

“After looking around the area for a while, Alistair was still unable to determine where he was, how he got there or how he was supposed to get back.”

Scene changes to Alistair in the middle of the bizarre room, scratching his head.
Alistair: God damn it. How the hell am I supposed to get out of here? Damn it, I don’t even know where ‘here’ is.

As Alistair is talking to himself, he hears a voice behind him. He looks back and sees a girl wearing a blue jacket, with white hair, a pair bunny ears and a fluffy little bunny tail, looking at a pocket watch as she goes running past.

The White Bunny:
https://image.ibb.co/jAgZ1w/image.png

White Bunny: Oh-No! Oh-No! Oh My! I’m So Late! She’s Going to be so mad.
Alistair: Huh? Hey. Excuse me miss? Hold on a sec. Could you please help me out?
White Bunny: I’m sorry sir. I don’t have time. Oh God! I’m Late! I’m Late! I’m So Very, Very Late!

She continues to run off through a doorway and Alistair follows her.
Alistair: Hey! Wait! Please Stop!

“Alistair ran after the White Bunny, trying to get her attention, and followed her into a large forest. He tried his best to keep up with her, but pretty soon he’d lost sight of her. As he stops to catch his breath, the realization of his situation dawned upon him. He’d managed to get himself even more lost in this unknown place. He decided to try and find his way back to the room he woke up in, but he’d gotten so turned around he ended up wandering in the wrong direction.”

Scene changes to Alistair walking through a bizarre forest of trees with purple leaves.
Alistair: Oh great. I don’t recognise this place at all. How did I manage to get myself even more lost?
????: Oh my. What’s this I see before me? Is that an actual man I see in my forest? What a pleasant surprise.
Alistair: Huh? Um, hello? Is someone there?
????: Up here cutie.

Alistair looks up into a tree and sees a purple catgirl lying on a branch, smiling down at him.

The Cheshire Catgirl:
https://image.ibb.co/mMUyTb/image.png

Alistair: Oh, hello miss. Who are you? I don’t suppose you could help me.
Cheshire Catgirl: They call me the Cheshire Catgirl. And I could certainly try, though I cannot promise that I’ll know the answers to your questions.
Alistair: Ok. Well, could you tell me where I am, and what on earths going on here?
Cheshire Catgirl: Well, as for where you are, this land is known as Cumderland, though I cannot tell you why, but I advise you to be careful.
Alistair: Really? And why is that?
Cheshire Catgirl: Why, because of the Queen. She’s been rounding up all the men she can find. She has them taken to her castle and I’ve never seen one come out again. At least, not looking well.
Alistair: Oh god. Well, how am I supposed to avoid her?
Cheshire Catgirl: Fortunately for you, I know a lovely little place where you could hide safely. And I’d be glad to tell you where, but there’s a little something I want from you first.
Alistair: Alright. And, what might that be?
Cheshire Catgirl: Well, I haven’t gotten any action in a while since the Queen took all of my fuck-buddies. So, I’ll tell you how to get there, but I want a good fucking first.
Alistair: Wh-What? I-I-I beg your pardon?
Cheshire Catgirl: You heard me cutie. Ever since the Queen started taking our men none of us have been getting any. Well, apart from the lesbians and the bisexuals. So, I’m gonna come down and get in position. If you want to know where to go, you’ll know what to do.

Sex Scene 1:
The Cheshire Catgirl kneels on the ground and leans against the tree as Alistair kneels behind her and fucks her doggystyle.
Position example:
https://ibb.co/eORRgw
Vaginal – Easy, Medium, Hard
Anal – Easy, Medium, Hard, Cum
Alistair cums inside her pussy.

Scene 3:
“After giving her the fucking she was looking for, the Cheshire Catgirl gave Alistair the directions she promised, and he soon found the place she told him about. Which turned out to be a rather odd-looking cottage, with a large table in the front garden, surrounded by chairs and covered in various teapots, cups, cakes and biscuits. He enters the garden and is greeted by the homes owners.”

Scene changes to Alistair in the garden with the homes owners. One is a blonde girl with giant breasts and wearing a big green top hat, and the other is a tanned skinned woman with really long brown hair and brown rabbit-like ears and tail.

The Bimbo Hatter:
https://image.ibb.co/mFcwEG/image.png

The Milf Hare:
https://image.ibb.co/hJpbEG/image.png

Milf Hare: Oh my. Look Hatter. We have a guest.
Bimbo Hatter: Mmm… Yeah we do. And a cute one too. So, who might you be?
Alistair: Um, hello ladies. I’m Alistair. I apologise if I’m interrupting anything.
Milf Hare: Oh, don’t worry. We’re always happy to have company. I am the Milf Hare and this little cutie is the Bimbo Hatter. So, what brings such a handsome young gentleman to our little neck of the woods?
Alistair: Well, this purple, cat-girl said that I could hide out here from the Queen. Though if she was mistaken or it would be too much of a bother, I don’t want to impose.
Bimbo Hatter: Oh it’s no trouble at all. We’re more than happy to have you stay with us.
Milf Hare: Indeed. It’s been so long since we’ve had a cute young boy to have fun with.
Alistair: I’m… I’m sorry what?
Bimbo Hatter: You heard her. Surely Ches told you about what’s happening with the Queen?
Alistair: Yeah. She said that she was taking all of the men for some reason.
Milf Hare: That’s right. Ever since her regime started we haven’t had any proper fun in ages.
Bimbo Hatter: Well you know, we do have a lot of fun with each other. And while she’s great with a strap-on, it’s been so long since we’ve had a real cock.
Milf Hare: So young man, if you’re going to stay here, I hope you’re up for having fun with both of us.
Alistair: Um… Well, uhh…
Bimbo Hatter: That settles it. Come on handsome. My arse has been craving a real cock for weeks.

Sex Scene 2:
The Bimbo Hatter and the Milf Hare 69 with the Bimbo Hatter on top. The Milf Hare sucks Alistair’s cock before he then fucks the Bimbo Hatter in the arse while the girls eat each other out.
Position example:
https://ibb.co/hZ2cob
Blowjob – Easy, Medium, Hard
Anal – Easy, Medium, Hard, Cum
Alistair cums over the Hatter’s butt and the Hare’s face.

Scene 4:
“Alistair enjoyed his stay with the Bimbo Hatter and the Milf Hare, but sadly it didn’t last long. The White Bunny showed up a short while later looking for him. Apparently, the Queen had found out about him and where he’s hiding and has sent some of her guards to get him. Not wanting him to be captured, the White Bunny takes him to her house where he’d be safe for a little while longer.”

Scene changes to Alistair and the White Bunny in her house.
White Bunny: Welcome to my home Alistair. I hope you enjoy your stay here.
Alistair: Thank you. Though I’m not sure how long it’s going to be till she finds me again. Why is she even doing this?
White Bunny: It all started a few years ago. The Queen used to have a lover that saw to her every need, but one day he just left without any reason. She tried to find a replacement, but after a series of new lovers failed to satisfy her, she started to round up every man in Cumderland to try and find someone suitable. But if they failed to satisfy her, or if they weren’t endowed enough, she had their dicks cut off. Pretty soon all the men went into hiding in fear of her, which made life miserable for the ladies of Cumderland.
Alistair: Wow. That’s… That’s pretty messed up. Isn’t there any way for me to get home?
White Bunny: Well… I’ve checked the way you came in, but that seems to have been blocked off. Aside from that, there’s only one way that I know of, but it’s too risky.
Alistair: Riskier than waiting around for her to catch me?
White Bunny: Well, when you put it like that. The only other possible way is by using an enchanted ring that can transport you wherever you want to be. The only problem with that plan, is that the Queen has the ring.
Alistair: Well that’s less than ideal. You know what, I just want this to be over with. I’m going for that ring.
White Bunny: Wh-What!? Are you serious?
Alistair: Yeah, I’m serious. I could either wait around for her to catch me. Or I could give my best chance of getting home a shot, even if the odds are terrible. I don’t suppose you’d be able to help?
White Bunny: Well, I-I guess so. But before you leave… W-would you have sex with me too? Y-you don’t know what might happen, a-and I think you’re really cute… So…

Alistair than wraps an arm around her and kisses her before moving on to the sex scene.

Sex Scene 3:
The White Bunny lies back on her bed and Alistair fucks her missionary.
Position example:
https://ibb.co/h5wEZG
Vaginal – Easy, Medium, Hard
Anal – Easy, Medium, Hard, Cum
Alistair cums inside the Bunny’s pussy.

Scene 5:
“Before Alistair departed, the White Bunny gave him a special cake that she said he may need, and that he’ll know when he should eat it. And since she was afraid of what the Queen might do if she found out she’d been hiding Alistair, she decided to stay behind. She wrote down the directions he needed to get to the Queen’s castle. She also told him what the ring looked like and Alistair set out.”

Scene changes to Alistair in the throne room of the castle. The Queen of Hearts is sitting on her throne. The Queen is a curvaceous woman with huge breasts and long, jet-black hair that reaches her waist.

The Queen of Hearts:
https://image.ibb.co/i9j9ZG/image.png

The Queen’s throne:
https://ibb.co/dbF58b

Queen of Hearts: Hmph. So, you’re finally here. I commend you for coming to me on your own. Though I should have you flogged for making me wait so long.
Alistair: My apologies your majesty. I would have arrived sooner, but I was delayed because for some reason my directions to your castle where written on an egg. Which is most difficult to read.
Queen of Hearts: I see. Well I am not interested in your excuses. Guards! Seize Him!

Two of the guards come up and grab Alistair.
Note for Vadim: The guards need to be women since ALL of the men in Cumderland have gone into hiding.

Alistair: Woah! Hey! What are you doing!?
Queen of Hearts: I still have yet to find a man who can satisfy me, so we’re going to see if you might be able to. Guards, take his manhood out. Let me see if it’s big enough.

As the guards reach for Alistair’s trousers, he holds a little cake that says “Eat Me” on it in one hand.
https://ibb.co/jgDE1w

Alistair, thinking to himself: (Is this what she was talking about? Well, only one way to find out.)

Alistair quickly eats the cake as the guards take his cock out and it makes his cock grow a bit bigger. Seeing the size of his cock makes the Queen and the guards smile.
Queen of Hearts: Oh my. You certainly are well endowed. Perhaps you’re the one I’ve been looking for. Guards, take him to my bedchamber. I must see if that cock is as good as it looks.
Alistair, thinking to himself: (Her bedchamber? This could be my chance to find that ring.)

Sex Scene 4:
Up in the Queen’s bedchamber, Alistair lies back on the Queen’s bed as she rides his cock. First, she takes his cock in her pussy, then her arse.
Position example:
https://ibb.co/hiPZZG
Vaginal – Easy, Medium, Hard
Anal – Easy, Medium, Hard, Cum
Alistair cums inside the Queen’s arse.

Scene 6:
Note for Vadim: This scene takes place right after the last sex scene.

“While the Queen rode on his cock, Alistair was able to focus enough to look around the room and spotted the ring in a small box next to the bed. He seized his chance and grabbed it while her eyes were closed.”
https://ibb.co/mAPpKR

Queen of Hearts: Ah, yes. This is the cock I’ve been looking for. From now on you’ll live here and satisfy your queen every…
Queen of Hearts: Wait. That is my ring! You Dare To Steal From Me!? GUARDS! GET IN HERE! OFF WITH HIS COCK!!!
Alistair: Sorry love, I don’t think so. I’m outta here.

“Before the guards could enter the room, Alistair used the ring and thought about being back by the tree in the park.”

“BONK!”
Scene changes to Alistair back under the tree where he sat down at the start of the game. He’s rubbing his head and there’s a ball on the ground next to him and a couple of kids standing nearby.
Alistair: Ow!
Kid: Oops. Sorry mister. Are you ok?
Alistair: Huh? Oh, yeah, don’t worry lads. I’m fine.
Kid: Well, we’re still sorry. Can we have our ball back.
Alistair: Oh, sure. Here you go.

He gives the kids the ball and they leave.
Alistair: Damn. That was insane. That can’t have been real. I must have fallen asleep while reading and that was just some crazy dream. It must be getting late by now, I’d better get back to the dorm room.

As he walks away, we see the ground where he was sitting and there’s a little egg with doodles on it.
https://ibb.co/gurZ1w

End of game.
Options to play again and to repeat sex scenes.
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Jimjim3DX
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Thu Feb 01, 2018 1:17 pm

While I'm personally not that invested in the wonderland "verse" I still think this is a pretty neat idea. Wouldn't mind seeing this as a standalone game, at least to see those characters designs of yours in motion.
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Mon Feb 19, 2018 10:12 am

DerLurker wrote:
Mon Feb 19, 2018 9:59 am
Kelumir, you can write it in any way you want, I will always find a way to fit it into my own world. That's the blessing and curse of imagination, it's limitless and allmighty^^
As long as what I actually intend for my characters fits in with your logic, you can do whatever you want. 8-)
DerLurker wrote:
Mon Feb 19, 2018 9:59 am
The Logic is short, that prior to Part 1 Justin's Mother and Sisters interrupted the plans of his divorced father which included mining that purple stone appearing in Part 2 where theycame in contact with it resulting in the.. easygoing actions in the first game which changed lucky hormone driven Justin as he saw what was possible. And so he agreed to his fathers offer to get him back as much as possible of that purple stone and of course using it freely on his family in exchange for position as Superhero-Commander in his new world with lots of willing superhero girls under him.
And I'd just like to throw another spanner into your works here.
The purple stone from SWF 2 isn't mine-able. Why? Because as it is clearly stated in the start of SWF 2, it is a bi-product from one of Professor Cole's experiments. Meaning, Professor Cole was trying to make one thing, and the purple stone was created as well.

So it cannot be mined because it does not appear naturally in the world, therefore there is none to be mined.

Also, I moved this debate here because the other thread is supposed to be about the new game.
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Mon Feb 19, 2018 1:13 pm

Serrated wrote:
Sat Dec 23, 2017 2:51 am
Opinions Required? Fine. You're short, funny looking, and your breath stinks! But hey!...you're the one asking for opinions! :lol:
I still stand by this. :|
DerLurker
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Mon Feb 19, 2018 4:44 pm

Kelumir wrote:
Mon Feb 19, 2018 10:12 am
Why? Because as it is clearly stated in the start of SWF 2, it is a bi-product from one of Professor Cole's experiments. Meaning, Professor Cole was trying to make one thing, and the purple stone was created as well.

So it cannot be mined because it does not appear naturally in the world, therefore there is none to be mined.

Also, I moved this debate here because the other thread is supposed to be about the new game.
you mean: claimed .
Professor Cole, you were tasked with delivering all of the found material to the analyzis and with the upmost care, why did you have one of your own?
Da you also have some hot sisters or aunts or neighbours? 8-) dirty, dirty
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Mon Feb 19, 2018 7:45 pm

DerLurker wrote:
Mon Feb 19, 2018 4:44 pm
Kelumir wrote:
Mon Feb 19, 2018 10:12 am
Why? Because as it is clearly stated in the start of SWF 2, it is a bi-product from one of Professor Cole's experiments. Meaning, Professor Cole was trying to make one thing, and the purple stone was created as well.

So it cannot be mined because it does not appear naturally in the world, therefore there is none to be mined.

Also, I moved this debate here because the other thread is supposed to be about the new game.
you mean: claimed .
Professor Cole, you were tasked with delivering all of the found material to the analyzis and with the upmost care, why did you have one of your own?
Da you also have some hot sisters or aunts or neighbours? 8-) dirty, dirty
No, I mean: STATED. :evil:

You can make up whatever connections you want in your head cannon, but know this, whatever I write in my ideas is lore. If I say that something is a bi-product from one of Professor Cole's experiments, then it IS a bi-product from one of Professor Cole's experiments. :x :evil:
Also, as it is STATED in SWF 3, the pink rock is one of Cole's inventions. Meaning he created it. Albeit accidentally, but still.

I'm probably getting more angry with this than I should, and I apologise for that, but I'm protective of my characters and the world I've created for them. So don't go changing what I have written for and/or planned to happen to my characters to fit in with your logic. Change your logic to fit in with the world that has already been established.

If it would help you adjust your head cannon, I would tell you what I have planned for the next games, but I'd prefer to do that somewhere more private. I don't want it to become common knowledge just yet.
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Tue Feb 20, 2018 12:15 am

Also, SMX, I hope you see this because I've redone the Lustful as well. For his new design I used Organisation XIII as a basis.
https://image.ibb.co/hH2yt7/image.png
Thought I would send my thanks instead of taking going off topic in JINXED thread. So cheers man I will change the link and submit the idea again sometime in the future.
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