MNF Metropolis - the XXX Files : Episode 2

[Kelumir]

Ok, it's out now. Now you can all stop complaining.

[Dwayne]

Good stuff Vadim! Loved the Knockerz scene the most. Also—liked the story, jimjim!

[Jimjim3DX]

Obviously I'm biased, but great work Vadim. It's great seeing this game come to life

Even though I read through my script a bunch of times it seems a few errors slipped through the cracks. There were some other errors here and there like Baka still showing up at the locations after he was supposed to have left at the last step of the investigation, and a couple of mislabeled dialogue boxes but nothing too major. It was bound to happen with such a large script involving multiple characters in every scene. It ended up being "13215" words long in a 51 page document. So I hope people liked it or at least didn't hate the story too much

Here is a link to a google doc containing the script for anybody wishing to see what I wrote or how I wrote it for future reference: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1o_- ... sp=sharing

Especially in regards to the character of Holly, I know I focused quite a bit on her in order to set her up as a recurring character in future episodes. I give people full permission to use her however they want in future episodes or games by the way. While I'd love to be involved in the writing process for her, it's not absolutely necessary to seek any permissions from me.

Finally I figured I'd share some of the designs I did for Holly and her outfits, even though Vadim made some changes I think they came out pretty nice in the game too. You can check them out in this album here: https://imgur.com/a/WEAxnya

I'd love to hear people's feedback on this character and the story in general, positive or negative

[TheUndertaker]

A very good game there. Awesome job Vadim

[fcrivers]

I disliked how Natalya's boobs felt like they were huge ballons... In the first game they were fluid, in this one the animation just felt rushed so they turned out like huge ballons going up and down. The sex scenes chosen weren't the best either, for an interrogation, the scientist wasnt even tied up to a chair or something...

I mentioned that Vadim should just follow his instincts and try to make the 2nd on his own or take a small part of submissions to make it. he decided to straight up copy the entire script and it turned out to be garbo

[junky]

I disliked how Natalya's boobs felt like they were huge ballons... In the first game they were fluid, in this one the animation just felt rushed so they turned out like huge ballons going up and down. The sex scenes chosen weren't the best either, for an interrogation, the scientist wasnt even tied up to a chair or something...

I mentioned that Vadim should just follow his instincts and try to make the 2nd on his own or take a small part of submissions to make it. he decided to straight up copy the entire script and it turned out to be garbo

I personally liked her boobbs but agree about animation it looks like very lazy, specially the option to grab boob in the last scene....
Another thing i didn't liked is that boobs movement during titjob scene was weird and unappealing. And Mizuki's face was weird too.
Oh and Vadim should add an option to replay sex scenes from the first episode after finishing the second one like Serega did in the Sinsomes game.

Other than that the game is solid.

[Jimjim3DX]

Thanks for the feedback,

@fcrivers, I think it was implied that the scientist had his hands chained up to the wall or something, why else would he be holding his arms all the way behind his back during that scene? Also it's fine if you didn't like the final script, but would you mind explaining what parts of the script in particular you thought were so bad that it made the whole game "garbo" in your opinion? Just curious.

[fcrivers]

I personally liked her boobbs but agree about animation it looks like very lazy, specially the option to grab boob in the last scene....
Another thing i didn't liked is that boobs movement during titjob scene was weird and unappealing. And Mizuki's face was weird too.
Oh and Vadim should add an option to replay sex scenes from the first episode after finishing the second one like Serega did in the Sinsomes game.

Other than that the game is solid.

Problem is the position is just trash, should have been a scientists pov with her tits going up and down on him and still finishing with tittyfuck not bj. The faces were super off aswell, as you mentioned. It was a rushed game to avoid having people complainng and turned out to be worse.

I already explained why Vadim should have stayed with his own gut, XXX files 1 turned out great, without any wack ass community feedback, and 2 is a hard pass, I can't recommend anyone subscribing for this mess, it could have been a situation where the story is wack but sex scenes are good, but both suck.

[junky]

I personally liked her boobbs but agree about animation it looks like very lazy, specially the option to grab boob in the last scene....
Another thing i didn't liked is that boobs movement during titjob scene was weird and unappealing. And Mizuki's face was weird too.
Oh and Vadim should add an option to replay sex scenes from the first episode after finishing the second one like Serega did in the Sinsomes game.

Other than that the game is solid.

Problem is the position is just trash, should have been a scientists pov with her tits going up and down on him and still finishing with tittyfuck not bj. The faces were super off aswell, as you mentioned. It was a rushed game to avoid having people complainng and turned out to be worse.

I already explained why Vadim should have stayed with his own gut, XXX files 1 turned out great, without any wack ass community feedback, and 2 is a hard pass, I can't recommend anyone subscribing for this mess, it could have been a situation where the story is wack but sex scenes are good, but both suck.

As for Vadim's drawing then it's just like that since 2017. He should step back and use his previous art style. Many persons mentioned that in many cases but he seems to not care.

[crocdeloup]

I agree with you, the new style of vadim is clearly less good